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Butterflies_dont_cry
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0 posted 2000-10-20 04:27 PM




Ease of grace I watch him fly
Across the path of Eastern sky
Graceful strokes of powerful wings
Ear piercing scream of pain he sings
Lasting are the memories he gives
Strength is his shield as he lives

Where will he land and will I see
I long for him to soar wild and free
Nothing shall hold him from his plight
Gallantly he soars as his hope takes flight

*Happy Birthday Eagle One*
  

© Copyright 2000 Butterflies_dont_cry - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2000-10-20 04:34 PM


It is becoming rare to see a perfect rhyme scheme, such as this one and you did a great job with it!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



EagleOne
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2 posted 2000-10-20 04:36 PM


My dear sweet Butterfly, your words are the greatest of gifts. You know how you have touched me with this. Thankyou just doesn't seem to be enough.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Victoria
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3 posted 2000-10-20 04:43 PM


lovely butterflies dont cry
and

HAPPY BIRTHDAY EAGLE ONE



           ~Victoria~



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2000-10-20 05:07 PM


Great job!
Deb

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-10-20 07:22 PM


Holly girl... ya penned him perfectly..
very cool poem ...sweet offering to very
kind friend across the miles.

and to Eagle ...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY MATE  

Hope you day is filled with all things special to your heart
and heres to a year of ~FATE AND DESTINY~ ..LOL
did we EVER settle that debate...
somehow I doubt it...LOL
have a good one on me...
later-wearing your birthday suit gator       hehe
jm

Daniel J D
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6 posted 2000-10-20 08:56 PM


Butterflies,
Well versed, shows your support for Eagleone clearly. Terrific.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2000-10-20 08:59 PM


Very beautiful verse from you to show the love you have for a friend.  Your heart is heard in every line as is the emotion and sincerity of the flow.  

"Eagle One"----HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-20-2000).]

Denise
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8 posted 2000-10-20 09:27 PM


This is lovely, Butterflies! Happy Birthday, Eagle One!

Denise

Sunshine
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9 posted 2000-10-20 09:31 PM


This is lovely...it passed by me, two or three times today, always coming back to the top...

you are special

such as he...

congratulations to both of you, for verse well done...and time well shared...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Aimster
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10 posted 2000-10-20 10:00 PM


Holly--

as always your heart of gold shines through. perfect declaration of friendship you have penned here. happy birthday eagle one. take care both of ya.

Amy  

tracie66
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11 posted 2000-10-20 10:08 PM


Holly~
Beautiful sentiments   well penned sweet one

EagleOne~
HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Butterflies_dont_cry
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12 posted 2000-10-21 01:02 AM


Kathleen* Heart felt thanks...this is my first acrostic so I very much appreciate your comment  

Eagle* Thank you is more than enough between friends! May your birthday be wonderful!!

Victoria* Thank you~

Deb* Thank you~

Janet* Thank you girlie...never know what we can do till we try...lol   didn't you tell me that once?...nah I'll never admit to that  

Daniel* Thank you very much your comment is very much appreciated~

Mark* Yeppers...he is a good friend imagine that...a man and a woman being Just friends...Yes it can be done  
**this was the disclaimer before any tounges start wagging** Thank you Mark...you know how much I appreciate your comments~

Denise* Many thanks to you~

Sunshine* Time with friends is always well spent...thank you for reading~

Amy-girl* Thank-you so much...and you take care of You  

Tracie* I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you very much~

Charisma
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13 posted 2000-10-21 09:50 AM


HAPPY BIRTHDAY EAGLE

great way to congrat Eagle, butterfly Superb
Charisma

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2000-10-21 10:39 PM


ButterfliesDC~
What a lovely acrostically done poem.
It's just lovely for a lovely person.
You're rocking, gal !

*Another birthday wish to you, dear EagleOne.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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15 posted 2000-10-22 01:27 AM


BDC,

Wonderful acrostic for Eagle One!!  I hope he had an excellent birthday.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Butterflies_dont_cry
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16 posted 2000-10-22 12:26 PM


Charisma* Thank you so much...that graphic is so beautiful!!

Marge* Your comment made me feel so good, this was my first attempt and wanted it to be good for Eagle's Birthday...Thank you so much~

LW* I hope he did too...thank you my dear friend!!

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