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What Does It Mean?
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What Does It Mean? |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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What Does It Mean In whispered spaces, times shaded, shadows sly,... lurking there in dark of night, in hidden gatherings, shy. Leaves, and litter alike scattered, then cornered, in hours consumed,.. in congested sky. What does it mean, when your life becomes blue,...upholstered, and beaded, covered in papered pages, raw, slipping slowly, bound in knots, set aflame, as you witness,.. in awe? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SpiteFire, You get an extinguisher. Very strong, very to the point and very good. Sy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I wish I knew what it means...Awesome writing, as always. Cat.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are still rocking on, lady...and I wish I had the answer for you...very vivid bonfire here. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
It means perhaps that it's time to re-examine it and verify that everything's in place, eh? Remarkable phrasing of your thoughts here lady - I love the cryptic manner you present the breath of pain in a cloak of beauty. HUGS C |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SpitFire~ this is very cool.  -SEA |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent poem! Sometimes life has a way of confusing us, thank God, as poets we can express that, as you have done so eloquently.  |
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