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..........Make Me Your Song..........
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..........Make Me Your Song.......... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 My ears hear the sound of your gentle voice, And I know I will never tire of listening… You touch my heart, and it starts to sing your praises… You’ve struck it’s chord, and it responds in harmony… A song of love takes form within my soul… Make me your song, and take my notes of love deep into you… Play me as part of your life’s own sweet melody… Listen to the joy as our two hearts sing… Make me your song… Follow your dream! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Great, now the song on the radio will probably stay with me the rest of the day...but I don't know if it is "your" song...LOL Wonderful, as always. Sending an E... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ K ~~~ At least the song in your head is probably better than some I've had up there lately!! Thank you, my friend.......see ya' later!!  Follow your dream! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Sunny, this is so pretty. I just did a musical song on DP, but it was the opposite of romantic  You know my head has gone from the clouds to the caves, in a very short time. Sounds happy here, and its true that songs and music of any kind can do so much for us (or to us) Sandra |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
i was looking for some inspiration - i believe you'r thrown my muse a hint of a bone - we'll see - this is really lovely Sunny |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sandra ~~~ Oh, my gentle friend....the song will change for you, I know..... from the blues to the sweetest lovesong on earth. Just listen.....it will find you!! ~~~ Wilfred ~~~ Thank you, and I can't tell you how many times you have inspired me.....so if my muse repays the favor, I am pleased!!! ~~~~~~  ~~~~~~Follow your dream! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi lil sis, this is wonderful, how you do this over and over is a complete mystery, and still you excell. Well it's just as well you're so talented, because come Christmas you have to do a turn at the rowdy sisters party. Mind you since you're in Alaska love you'll be allowed to do yours via a post. It's not too bad kid, a bit rowdy, but fun. Take care Bubbles  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
If I could, It would surely be a song of joy, hope and dreams, as you always seem to overflow with each. Lovely as usual. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunny--a really lovely song! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you've composed a lovely tune of promise and anticipation Sunny... beautiful presentation as well very nice indeed jm |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Bubbles ~~~ Would be more than happy to join your Christmas party!!! How rowdy do you get?? Ha!! (Thanks for reading, too!!) ~~~ Jamie ~~~ I guess I am a hopeless dreamer, and I can't change at this late date, so I write like one. Seems like if you want something bad enough and you can write it into words, it makes it more attainable!! Thank you for being here....it is always so good to see you, my friend! ~~~ Martie ~~~ Oh....I am so glad that you came by and enjoyed this. I really do enjoy your writing also, and look up to you for what you do........I thank you...... Follow your dream! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ jm ~~~ So good to see you, and I do thank you for the really nice reply. That means a lot!! I think we all need to anticipate something special in our lives.....that's what keeps it exciting!! Thanks again, my friend... Follow your dream! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
hhhmmmmm...me thinks that you would make a perfect song. Excellent write my dear siser of the blue pages. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
...Brother o' mine... My song is not perfect, but it is me. Most of the time it is blue.......but that is what I sing...... Follow your dream! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sunny* This is so beautifully written...flows like a song of the heart, I enjoyed this very much~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ You sing a sweet song, my friend. Enjoyed as usual ... maybe even more !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunny girl Delightful piece, wonderful to read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ To Butterflies, Marge, and Tracie ~~~ I do so thank you girls for your wonderful replies. This means a lot to me, more than you could know right now, and I cherish your friendship...... Thank you, my friends Follow your dream! |
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