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Open Poetry #10

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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-10-20 01:13 PM

a hand held
judge and jury
cool to my
touch, yet
brings a fire
to your heart

and ...
while your
black soul
seeps to
the ground
and your
gurgles of life
are drowned out

the small patch
in the garden
where the lilies
grew ... until
beaten into
submission

now stretch
their roots
to quench their
thirst...

and I have
to wonder...

if the only
drink left
is from
demonic sewage

will the sweet
fragrance
and delicate
petals
grow demon fangs
and rip apart
the flesh
of a true
gardner?

10-20-00
Snow's Ice Castle

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

1 posted 2000-10-20 05:00 PM

Neve, reading again, I see yet another avenue for my thoughts to travel...yes, engaging, once again.

~enb~

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

2 posted 2000-10-20 05:14 PM

It really makes me think. Good job.

Love is the law, love under will.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2000-10-21 04:48 AM

when I'm told that I've made someone think, because of what I wrote, then I know I've accomplished what I had set out to do.

thank you for your replies.

snow

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