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djjepp Junior Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 14 |
It's been 5 days since You got on the plane I miss you so much I'm going insane I think of what we had And what could be To spend our life together Just you and me I can hear your voice And laughter in my mind When I lay down at night And try to unwind I miss playing cards And talking to you We had so much fun Now what do I do I hope in the near future You'll come back So I can straighten you out with a double "WHACK" To those of you who read this, the "whack" is an inside joke. It's not meant to be taken seriously. I Love You Sweetheart and always will |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Djjepp~ that "whack" sounds kinda private....heee heee  This is a very sweet poem  -SEA |
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djjepp Junior Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 14 |
thank you SEA, I'm still new at poetry writing.  [This message has been edited by djjepp (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very sweet poem, djjepp! Nicely written! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done djjepp, Do not worry too much, just show her/him the poem and she'll be right mate. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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djjepp Junior Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 14 |
snowpants- Thank-you glad you liked it Daniel J D- Thanks, I hope you're right |
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