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In My Dreams..........
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In My Dreams.......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
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You stole into my dreams last night and swept my heart away you took me to a far off place and asked me there to stay The music played so softly the words you spoke so sweet you pulled out all the stops and completely swept me off my feet With candle light and daisies slow dancing and white wine hot kisses up my neck wild shivers down my spine My heart was beating loudly my pulse screaming in my head............... Oh.......the alarm clock is ringing........ time to get out of bed. -SEA- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
SEA---I do so like this--I just hate when it happens to me...cute write!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
SEA... Dontcha just hate alarm clocks?? This was a perfect first-morning read!! Thank you for putting it here........  Follow your dream! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ thank you very much....I had fun with this....  Sunny1~ Yes, I do, especially when they go off at 5am... thank you. -SEA |
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djjepp Junior Member
since 2000-10-05
Posts 14 |
SEA, Don't you just hate getting woke up in the middle of a good dream, I do. Nice writing. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahha ya big tease...  get me all riled up and then throw cold water on me LOL very clever...sea-girlie... thats what snoooooze buttons are for turn over and go back for more  cute, imaginative poem kissed with sensual touch... works for me later-over-sleeping-gator jm |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
SEA - kewl - I would have gone further before the alarm (think I did once) - love those dreams even more now that I don't set alarms ~S~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Djjepp~yes, good dreams always seem to end much too soon. Janet~ I have to get up out of bed to go hit snooze!! That is so fustrating!  Thanks for enjoying my dream.... WY~ Sometimes, I don't hear the alarm....... Sunshine~ -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, I thought I'd read this but if I did I didn't leave a note, so maybe I didn't. It's a really a super poem, so cute, and too true too. The number of times I've had to buy a new alarm clock, because the last one suddenly and with no help whatsoever, simply flew across the room. Beautifully written, and I really like this one. Take care Marsha |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
The true dreamweaver??? lovely SEA. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~All by themselves eh? Funny......thank you Prometheus~ thank you for the lovely...... -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Shhh...Shhh...shhh...my sweet, lie back down...no alarm went off. It was only one of them nightmares trying to get a piece of the action....roll back over here to my arms...there, now doesn't that feel better? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ Quit talking and pull the covers back up, I'm cold...... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Quit talking she sayssssss....but how many times did I hear my name called out last night!!!!! And did you hear me complain...NO!!! Not hardly!!!! My sweet, roll on over here again and cowboy will keep you warm starting from the inside out as I send burning passion deep into your ... errrr...aaaa....oh yeah...your "heart". Well, where did you think I was going to start?  Where else would a friend be....but ONLY in the heart!!! [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Well, I can see this could get x-rated real fast cowboy...tame it down and be good or you are gonna have me in a mess of trouble! (you know, that whole husband thing) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
ROFL...okay my sweet friend....back to dreaming you go....now don't forget to throw the blanket over the horse before I tuck you in.... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ You make me smile the sweetest of smiles, you are so much fun....thank you for that.... I just love it. -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
....LOL Oh yeah I just hate that.... Great poem SEA Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dreams left slumbering in the heart As the alarm sounds today's start Left to taunt all through the day Hibernating till sleep is but winks away Many ranges we shall roam ever so free Many nights of heaven's stars for us to see So many places for two friends to go for a ride I count my blessings and call you friend with pride. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ Me too......*SIGH* this is so sweet. -SEA (thank you) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Me fickle??????? There are times when a cowboy needs more than a dream of heaven ya know.........LOL...my friend, you always will know you are in my heart in it's PROPER place. {{{HUGS TO YA!!!!}}} |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, Waking from such dreams and remembering them is meaningful. It is those other beauties we never remember that eludes imagination. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Well, if you ask me, there is nothing worse than a wonderful dream interrupted by the alarm clock, reminding us of reality. They should be outlawed. LOL Loved the poem!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A beautiful dream...and a slam into reality...I go through more alarm clocks this way |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
no you don't, get back in that bed and finish what you started, I was just starting to really enjoy this read.. damn. Parker takes out handy dandy bat, ...whack... alarm clock 0, Parker 1. Parker |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Great work, very well done. I'm just glad I have a supply of cheap alarm clocks. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A well crafted poem expressing emotional content clearly, well worth a read or two. Gloom |
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Eskendale Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 17 |
That's exactly why I like dreams... and hate school |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh no.......not the alarm....Slame on him....keep him quiet, and....mmm....drift away in this sweet dream.... love it....Sea mmm not the alarm Charisma |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
I wish the alarm clock hadn't gone off, this poem was getting interesting Jon |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ Thanks DJD~ I love sweet dreams, the alarm always finds a way to interrupt! Snowpants~ I know!! Glad to see you stopped in, thank you BDC~ that's why I keep mine across the room, so I won't kill it! Parker~ for you handsome, I'd throw the alarm clock away!! (I wrote "Back To Sleep" to finish the dream......check it out)...... Eagle One~ thank you! P Gloom~ Cool, thank you. Eskendale~ Get your homework done! thanks sweetie! Charisma~ thank you for the love it!! -SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sorry Jon, you snuck in there.... thank you for checking this out. -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL, good change at the end there! LOL what a dream! Good one, I enjoyed this one, ya had me going! |
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