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jonmcm
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0 posted 2000-10-20 09:00 AM



We like to dance the nights away
To music that makes the heaviest heart gay.
The rhythm that comes to us seduces,
Such is the fruit this cadence produces.

Blinded in this melodious trance,
You and I aroused still dance.
Our bodies swaying to the alluring beat,
Our hearts, our lips, and our eyes do meet.

Allied with this music the climax builds,
All heightened senses to the forefront filled.
Love is kindled in this time we’re sharing,
Our bodies, our minds, and spirits are yearning.

As notes do build to the planned crescendo,
Our passion aligned, to fulfilment does end so.
For the songwriters full intent is clear
For us to make love to his music here.


© Copyright 2000 Jonathan McMahon - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-20 09:34 AM


Jon~ Excellent!! I love slow dancing....... -SEA
inot2B
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2 posted 2000-10-20 10:35 AM


I do so love the bedroom waltz.
Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2000-10-20 10:53 AM


Jon this was a perfect dance and a sweet melody indeed!
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4 posted 2000-10-20 10:58 AM


Sheet music is the best haa..enjoyed..

           ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

jonmcm
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5 posted 2000-10-20 07:31 PM


SEA, inot2B, Rosebud, Victoria

Glad you got into the groove!

Cheers
Jon

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