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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
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0 posted 2000-10-20 07:17 AM


Pendant lover .

In my pendant you sit,
Shining bright as gold,
And when I think back at you,
My heart just goes so cold .
Your always there,
In my mind,
My melancholy state,
When I feel this way today,
I want to run and hide .
I’ll sit and stare,
For hours,
Just at the same small spot,
That spot that’s back in nothingness,
I think of all the rot .
I think of you for hours,
And what we could have seen,
If only you had been so true,
You could have been my queen .
But now you sit forever,
Just staring back at me,
Your face divine,
I sit and whine,
Of what we could have been .

Written by Tom Baker .©





Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

© Copyright 2000 angelswing - All Rights Reserved
nona
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 139
Fla
1 posted 2000-10-20 07:52 AM


Hmmmmm yep I guess we all have a "Pendant" lover..maybe our dreams of what COULD have been, far outweigh what WOULD have been. the sad part is we will never know....great write ...hope to see more
                                   nona


[This message has been edited by nona (edited 10-20-2000).]

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-10-20 08:17 AM


Tom~
This is superbly penned...loved it  
I could feel the lonliness in this and the heartache ~HUGS~ if ya need them
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
3 posted 2000-10-20 08:38 AM


Thankyou both, I don't think there is anyone on Earth who can say that they don't have someone that they care for that they don't see any more or alot that they wish they could be close to again . So in a way even if we don't have a pendant, the memories act in this way . Although love can be realy cruel sometimes . Thankyou very much . And I always need ~HUGS~ Thanks Tracie, sometimes there all that keep me going .
- It is in your support I find my strength -
L.of.L. Tom .


Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

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