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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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One all most hopes for pathetic fallacies < !signature-->at times like the ones you’ve described and be it near a funeral home or a sundry time in June or just a gentle kiss of goodbye on a night with perfect tune it seems so to hurt a little more you know the one you really love plus ones you might don’t forget about yourself and it’s such a melodious and graceful piece and what you said was most likely right but didn’t I hear you say “One almost hopes” Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-21-2000).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, real clever, I love the heart shape you managed to cram the poem in, it says almost as much as the poem itself . I enjoyed it loads, your a most skilled writer . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
the regrets I carry for not hearing and the sadness neglected - wrapped up so well I'm getting used to read you Dale - (feeling comfortable with stream of consciousness scares me a little ~G~) Damm - you do this well |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Yes, this heart-tugger tenderly pulls at mine. I am always sorry when you write of sadness, yet I find it so beautiful. There is so much sorrow in my own heart, that sometimes I think we have a kinship of sorrow, as well as deepest love. Love, your wife Rosemary The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Tom, glad you liked. Bill, nice to see you my friend. It seems that "stream of consciousness" is what people want to hear, so I try... to be honest. Your right... scary dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
RJ, we've certianly been there... and a lot of other people too... it's nice to share with others on the outside... Then I find I'm not so alone. I love you bubba, dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Lucky,...enjoying the release of this. It reaches out, it's,...I don't know, it's so hard to explain what this does to ya. Your writing is something I will look forward to in the future,...I like your voice. *Peace. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Spit, not sure what to say, I guess I look for ways to project feelings that are out of the ordinar. third person reply to a fictitious scenario,,,, are you lost yet..? don't worry you will be..! < !signature--> Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderfully written beautiful but quite sad. I wish you well friend. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Brian, Nah, nothings really the matter... just gearing up for the fall and that post winter Blooze. Thanks for caring though... dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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