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Nascar_Chick
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since 2000-10-18
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0 posted 2000-10-20 03:43 AM


The Lost Little Girl

I know this girl,
you see
she use to live inside of me

she dreamed big dreams
of goin away to beautiful places
and meeting the most interesting people

as a little girl
she use to sit in her bed at night
and plan out this perfect life

she had everything figured out
every last little detail
she knew what she wanted from life

but this little girl is lost...
she lives in a body not her own
she slowly watched herself turn into someone else

now, she's just an empty soul
reaching out for something to hold on to

she screams out for help
but her voice is a language
no one else understands

she'll sit and cry all day long
but her tears are invisible to everyone else

no one understands her
hell........no one even notices her anymore

slowly, she's slipping away
from everyone and everything
she has no one........has nothing

she's tried so hard for so long
but her time has run out
she is no longer need here,
no longer wanted here


this lost little girl is saying
........Goodbye........


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Smells Like Teen Spirit
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since 2000-10-20
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1 posted 2000-10-20 04:00 AM


Good stuff

Bad if your relating to yourself you might need some help girl.


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-10-20 04:09 AM


This is so terribly sad and lonely a piece, hope it's not your real thoughts, if so and you need or want someone to talk to feel free to email me
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
3 posted 2000-10-20 03:51 PM


a true poem indeed. i know very well this theme of the loss of innocence.

if you like Green Day, then you probably know the song "the grouch".

when you're little and the world is never the big place you see it for now, life is so easy to plan for. now i know that there are things out there that are scary and real. there are demons to face down and temptations that are hard to fight. more often than not, this is not the life i ordered. it never will be.
it's like you said. that lovely little dreamer inside is saying goodbye.
good thoughts. i enjoyed.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
4 posted 2000-10-20 03:58 PM


Remember there is hope. It's like a cloud you see where the rainbow is.
Just look up and ask to see.
hugs,
Deb

Nascar_Chick
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since 2000-10-18
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5 posted 2000-10-20 11:32 PM


Thanks everyone
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