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and she dreams...

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dgvarner
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0 posted 10-20-2000 03:14 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for dgvarner


and she dreams...
of distant kisses
wishing they were near
while he speaks of
dances beneath the stars
with lovers words sincere

she cannot know
the thoughts that tumble
save for those he lends
she tries to restain
the flutter, the stutter--
she knows the rules she bends

and he dreams...
of distant kisses
and winks without a word
subtle suggestions
carry his clues
and he hopes that she has heard

longing fills them
with each line
as they pen with poets hue
passion's kiss
near fatal miss
a dream to tell--it was you...

-dgvarner
10-20-00
3am


my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends  -Queen

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-20-2000).]
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Jon Mewett
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1 posted 10-20-2000 03:30 AM       View Profile for Jon Mewett   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jon Mewett

Sensual entanglement.......a rather daring dance DGV........penned with grace..

Jon
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Oh I loved this very much....so beautifully penned  
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


dgvarner
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JON..i thank you much! ..a daring dance aye..ya think??  

TRACI..glad you enjoyed..thank you very much  

hugs, dg


my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen
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hmmmmmm, very nice. We don't need no stinking rules...  

Parker
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Ahhh....this I enjoyed very much!!! It describes romance among poets, and does it so very well!!!  


Follow your dream!

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and she dreams...
of distant kisses
wishing they were near
while he speaks of
dances beneath the stars
with lovers words sincere

she cannot know
the thoughts that tumble
save for those he lends
she tries to restain
the flutter, the stutter--
she knows the rules she bends
==================

ahhh what would life and poetry be with out sweet temptation...
makes for lovely inspiration ...
love the longing and anticipation in this ...
enjoy the flutter....
lifes already too full of rules and restraint
(this advice coming from a moth)lol    
well done
take care JM
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7 posted 10-20-2000 11:35 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

this is good...very good...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ


vlraynes
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dg-
  you KNOW i love this.  
  very romantic...and what's
  a schoolgirl to do but bend
  the rules...lol.  
  have fun  

  love ya,
     -tricks

p.s.***whispering***..i think he likes you



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


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~DG,...lovely this was to read. I'll read it again. Thank ya. *Peace.
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Oh damn, I hate to get obnoxious with my personal stuff, but this one is forcing me  
This is EXACTLY what was going on in my life, and then later, when we were together, he took it all away.   Sure enough to shatter a lot of romantic illusions.
Sorry, had to express that. This is a fantastic writing, and it brings those feelings in loud and clear..Wow. Good luck if this is you, I hope it turns out happy for you.
Catalinamoon
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What's the old saying....if you don't bet you can't win. Of course you could lose big time or just lose your shirt. heck lose all your clothes. So is that what the saying means if you bet you could lose all your clothes.... so I don't see the problem?.


Parker
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Dee, delightful, and delicious, and loud bravos. So tell me Dee, need that line yet, remember just grab it when you're ready. still love looks like you might need it soon?

Anyway love, remember be good, but not too good. You knew I'd love this didn't you? Yes I know!!
             Bubbles
            
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touching beneath the same sky while yet apart...
dgvarner
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parker..we'll make our own rules  

sunny..glad you enjoyed    thank you!

janetmarie..true.....true.... all you say is truth...    thanks for reading!

sunshine..thank you!  

tricks..*giggling*  ya think??  

spitfire..thank you for reading twice!  

catalinamoon..we cant know how it will turn out..but i believe it will continue to be "happy" how ever things turn out  

parker..LOL....what problem.......??

marsha..line?  what line??  i need a line...?     glad you enjoyed  

hugs, dg

dgvarner
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prometheus..  yes....    the same sky...   sometimes it seems so big...but if we close our eyes........

hugs, dg
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Dee love, only if you want to hook up to a star, mind you you know how jealous stars get when one outshines them. No kid you stay here, and beam away. I did tell you I love this didn't I? You know what my head is like, well if I didn't, I love it, and if I did well then I did.
Take care
                     Marsha
                              


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
dgvarner
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marsha... beaming is me  


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he reads. . .
and hears the music begin
he tells her to take that chance
for love only happens when we listen

Excellent dg. . . we all have danced that dance. . . sometimes we don't know the steps. . . but it's the learning that makes it worthwhile. . .

And if that doesn't work. . . you could always listen to Parker!  LOL

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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DG,

Wonderful piece you have penned.  So full of love and longing.  Very romantic and beautiful.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
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DG--

The flow of this is just simply
amazing. you have penned a real
beauty in this one! loved the emotion
and open expressiveness. and the
longing takes the breath away. just
simply beautiful.

take care.
amy  
dgvarner
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21 posted 10-24-2000 03:27 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

sven..youre a smart man sven...     thanks for the sweet reply...oh..but, listening to parker..well....that could get me into trouble!!    


lone wolf..if you got "love and longing" out of this...i have succeeded in my conveying..  

aimster..many thanks for your most wonderful reply!!    

hugs, dg




my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends  -Queen

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-24-2000).]
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sweet romantic dreams.
love to read it,...

you have penned it so full desire,
loved it.

Charisma
dgvarner
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thank you CHARISMA..   i enjoyed writing this  

hugs, dg
vlraynes
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dg-
  this one just looks way too lonely
  back here all by itself...i think
  it needs another ride to the top...
  those dreams just keep getting better
  and better, don't they...
  
  love and hugs,
  -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


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