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To Touch Your Lips to Mine
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To Touch Your Lips to Mine |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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©2000 Christopher Ward reaching sighing -smile slightly skewed palm to knuckles, skin to skin... slid gently up your arms feel the tingling touch your blue eyes locked to mine -goose bumps ticklingticklingtickling shivering your spine beneath my hand, brushing your hair, fingertips caressing the nape of your neck rubbing, feeling breathing, beating moving into a pulsing rhythm... until- it all becomes a dream of washed away cares then - leaning slowly in to breathe a kiss, to touch your lips... to mine < !signature--> Read my Words. Read my Face. Don't just look at either. -Me- [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Well, I might say this warmed things up a bit!  Oh the excitement and anticipation of a kiss.... Mmm... to breathe a kiss I love it from beginning to end....or should I say beginning to beginning  heheYou've said it well Chris. < !signature--> ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Warm? Warm? Man Christopher if it got any hotter I do believe I would melt WHEW |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Warm? How could something so hot give me the shivers? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you succeeded quite nicely with this one, Christopher. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Christopher, Christopher, Christopher! You have captured the sweet anticipation of a kiss sooo perfectly. What a wonderful poem...what a wonderful YOU! ;-) |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
How beautiful...You caught the kissers perfectly..  |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Christopher, Do you think it was wise to post this in a forum with so many ~ahem~ open, intelligent females? We have the power to hunt you down you know ... heheh, kidding aside, this sent my mind to two interlaced extremes: OMG this is so SWEET! to OMG!... not to mention that it was brought on by some honestly beautiful writing. More! More! ... wait a minute, I might want to get to sleep tonight.~ BEth |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
this is one of those pieces that is not only seen while reading the words, but felt... omygosh.. when I was finished I realized I had been holding my breath. That is a very good thing! *smile* Good thing I live in an "Ice Castle" heehee Snow's Ice Castle |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gee Christopher, this feels so good! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful poem Christopher Loved the images it produced....great writing Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
oooooohhhh very nice, verrrrryyyy nice Christopher enjoyed the read, well done!  "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Good morning Christopher! Whew! Who needs a fire in the fire place when you're writing like this....hot......wonderful. -SEA |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
"blue eyes" coloured was inspired chris, and though this isn't maybe my favourite type of writing you even managed to send a slight tremor through the piece of granite in my ribcage ~grin~ thanks P sorry just had to pop back ..... "open intelligent females" ... rotflmao beth  [This message has been edited by Poertree (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOOHOO!!  that feels tinglingtinglingtingling all over!! i love, "breathe a kiss.." wow..... very wonderful! love the way you wrote it hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I see you've been kissing that blued eyes figure in the mirror again! Sigh, what have I told you about that? - LOL Geeze, you sure know how to bring the romance out in a kiss - Yuk! What am I to do with you? Uh, I liked this btw but hey, ain't it about time you started practicing on someone real? Seriously - a well done write, Chris - makes me want/need to go kiss that someone special I have as I remember all to well the longing of such beforehand. Now, if you'll excuse me, I think I'll do just that. Michael |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Tender images Christopher..liked alot. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
WOW hot
Charisma |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sheri - There are kisses, then there are kisses! This was about the latter. Paula - Thank you lady - glad to warm you up! Karen - It's only because you know the source and are properly scared. Kathleen - Thank you. Every once in a while I do something right!  Beki - I take it that I did ok then? Thank you for a glowing reply!BWA - Yes, but only in my imagination. Thank you for your time! Beth - Thank you for a smile brought instantly to my face. The thought of such a beautiful, intelligent and talented lady hunting me down, isn't quite the deterrent I think you were shooting for! Snow - I think at least here and there, all of us have lived in an "Ice Castle." Most of us haven't dedicated a web site to it tho! Kari - Bet you'd like to know! Tracie - Thank you - Placing images in your head is the goal! Maree - Will you quit calling me Christopher!?! Grrrrrrrrrr. Thank you for the reply tho!  SEA - So should I have waited a month or two for colder weather? Philip - Presentation is everything. Wow - I'm impressed... especially since I know you have no feelings whatesoever! Thank you kind sir... ~smirk~ DG - tinglingtinglingtingling is good! Thank you!  Mike - You'd better watch it bud - I know... well, really not much, but that's besides the point. Yep - go kiss her, and give her a hug for me, eh? Victoria - Tender kisses as well. Thank you! Charisma - What an appropriately charming reply. My thanks! Again - thank you all for the wonderful responses! Chris Read my Words. Read my Face. Don't just look at either. -C |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Christopher~ It's raining and cold here today....... -SEA |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yum.....I want one of these!!! Beautifully done Chris. And I have blue eyes!!! Come here!!! Smoochies! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
awe Chris, do you really have to go and do this to a woman desperately missing her guy....*grumbles* LOL, anyways, splendid write my friend, definitely gave me the tingles. *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe.....ya look so cute all puckered up like that SC's... ya ya....I liked it H [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 10-21-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I KNEW IT---PdV has blue eyes....and what did I say? sigh...I am now engaged to both of you...a promise is a promise... |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Oh, to be kissed like that again! *sigh* Take me as I am or watch me as I go |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Gee...am I too late? Looks like it...might go walk in some fields instead...do a bit o' nature spotting...commune with the bovines and suchlike...sit on a boulder and think... or instead I could comment on this kiss of yours. Or not-yet-kiss as the case may be. Sweet anticipation indeed...how wonderful you... You know you did well here C, those S's and L's work to create a river-flowed poem...I could go so far to say sensuous, romantic and beautiful. might I add though I STILL think it needs a hyphen... K |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Mmmmmmmm, that was nice ... can we do it again? Wonderfully sensual Chris ... you've built up the anticipation with such perfect imagery, a tantalizing read indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
SEA - Then perhaps I chose the right time! Sharon - You lady, are one of the few who can ALWAYS expect a kiss! (ms. blue eyes!) Krista - Look at it this way... at least you HAVE someone!!!! Peace lady, and thank you! Holly - So how about the location...? 'Member what I said...hehe Karen - You, me, AND Sharon? I have died and gone to heaven! YAY! Tara - Ahh yes - again, eh... errr... you weren't supposed to tell them about our first time!  Kamla - ??? What? You've completely missed the meaning behind this whole poem you twit! J/T of course!! Hugs lady - and no - no - hyphen - for - you - in - this - hehehe Kit - You're not supposed to tell either! Geez! How's a guy supposed to woo all these women when you're all telling on me!?! Thanks lady!C Read my Words. Read my Face. Don't just look at either. -C |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~PeeKaBoo~ *Nice, vEry nice writing Christopher* ~Enjoyed this in it's entirety.~ *Peace You* . |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I don't think I missed the point... Coincidence? I think not. My blue eyes are too pretty for you NOT to be talking about me..... A sheep can only dream..... But than again, perception could certainly be reality....isn't that what poetry is about? I'm not being as cryptic as I should be. Sorry. .....bEtH "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
makes me wish I were 20 years younger.... I loved it< !signature-->"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-27-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent romantic writing....James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like someone is having good nights, of late.. This is delicious. Stuff dreams are made of. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Christopher--this is such sensual writing, beautifully done! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...i had to come back again...ppppsssttt...my eyes are blue as well |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is beautiful writting. I enjoyed it alot!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Christopher, I hope I'm not to late, but this is truly awesome writing. Well done, well done indeed. ~Big Smiles~ On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Before this sinks too far, I wanted to thank those of you who took the time to reply! A - Hugz lady you - kindly spoken, kindly taken! Beth - No, I don't think you missed the point, and yes you do have beautiful eyes - perhaps then, it was meant for you! Kathleen - Uhh... then you'd be too young for that kiss!!! James - Thank you for replying! Sandra - Too bad for now it's just a dream. Thank you lady! Martie - Your comments are muchly appreciated! Paula - So are mine... whatchoo trying to get at??? Beth - So did I, was a pleasure to write! Thank you! Gentle Spirit - Never too late! Always welcome to reply! Again, thank you all for the wonderful responses! Chris |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Chris! Denise |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
NO I wouldn't I'd be 30!!!!! but thanks for the lift!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Chris- I checked in the crown department of the jewelry store - fortunately they haven't run out - I gave mine to Mark and 'deer - so they're sending one to you - engraved 'greatest' |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Wow how romantic. You capture the moment purrfectly -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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