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Open Poetry #10

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jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-10-20 12:15 PM

ocean waves
wash my soul
cleanse me of your
smile

and the memory of
ten fingers
entwined forever
in a
hopeless wish

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-10-20 01:59 AM

this is beautiful in it's simplicity and refreshing to read, it needs nothing more!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen

Elizabeth Cor
Senior Member

since 2000-10-13

Posts 879
Over the river and through the woods

2 posted 2000-10-20 02:51 AM

Uhm, ditto! Irish rose explained my sentiments so beautifully and so completely I've been left speechless. Jennie May, I LOVED this.

and the memory of
ten fingers
entwined forever
in a
hopeless wish

Oh, gorgeous!!!

~ Beth

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (edited 10-20-2000).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-10-20 04:24 PM

Jenny May,
this is awesome, so simple yet profound.
be well
Kethry

Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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