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Open Poetry #10

Fourty-four degrees Celsius...

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-10-19 11:19 PM

Forty-four degrees Celsius on the thermometers,
But in dreams, the mercury climbs into the hundreds.
And we,-- identical points in the opposite quadrants,
Push open the windows and extend our diameters.

Watch as two drops of rain widen their rings in water,
Until finally, their boundaries run in the waves of sound,--
So shall we, shifting the lines of the border,
Push out our circumferences and grow unbound.

Check out my poetry here:

http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2000-10-19 11:35 PM

I could quote, but this is
one piece that I really believe
needs to stay as a whole.

I like what you said
and how you said it!!

snow

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 2000-10-20 06:38 AM

Thank you Snow and welcome to the Forum.

Check out my poetry here:

http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2000-10-21 08:40 AM

Bumping this one to the top.... wonderfully written loved the images.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-10-21 08:45 AM

Master~
Quite ponderous.
I like that.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

5 posted 2000-10-21 08:51 AM

..I like..good writing! 180 degrees to connect..so liked the two drop...enjoyed.
Marcy

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

6 posted 2000-10-21 10:42 AM

Thanks guys, glad you enjoyed it!

Check out my poetry here:

http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet

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