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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-10-19 10:50 PM

Forbidden Kisses

don't show me
any mercy
not now
not
ever

hold me...press
your strength
against
me
in gentle waves
of passions
dance

beating against
the shore
I meet you
over
and over

lost
within the crashing
found again
in the
rolls of
salty foam

as it leaves
a trail
of
forbidden
kisses
against
my thighs

< !signature-->

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall
through the ice." (Watercourse 3/00)

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 10-19-2000).]

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-10-19 10:55 PM

Welcome, Snow! I liked the vision of the sea, and the love in this poem.

Elizabeth

Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near...
hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-10-19 11:12 PM

Again, welcome to Passions Snow. . . I hope to read more from you in the future. . .

This is simply wonderful. . . the visions. . . soft. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2000-10-20 03:15 AM

Elizabeth and Sven,
thank you both for the welcome and the comments. this is one of my favorite pieces and it feels good to see you liked it also.

snow

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2000-10-20 03:35 AM

this is awesome!! very much love it..and the way it was written!!

hugs, dg

my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2000-10-20 05:55 AM

softly and with desire,

well done. I really liked it, and will look forward for more.

Charisma

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

6 posted 2000-10-20 11:24 AM

I love the beach at midnight and beyond...your passions take me there...daily.

Lovely writing, as always...

~enb~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2000-10-20 11:28 AM

Hmmm. I think it's one of my favorite pieces too...very, very, nice work, snow!

Welcome to passions, but sounds like you're already quite at home! smiles to ya!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

8 posted 2000-10-20 01:09 PM

dg...*smiling* thank you for that great comment. I'm glad you like how I wrote this.

Charisma...thank you for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed this.

Robert...*soft smile* you know, sometimes I just don't know what to say to you. *chuckle*

serenity...Thank you! That means a lot to me that you would say this is one of your favorites. What a great way to start the day.

Again...Thank you all very much.

Snow

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2000-10-20 01:22 PM

Mmm, I love this too, I think nothing could be quite as good as forbidden kissed on the beach.
Sigh..I had hoped for such an experience..
Great poetry, strong visions through the words.
Catalinamoon

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