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BamaPoet
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 34
Dothan, AL USA

0 posted 2000-10-19 09:19 PM


Your soft brunette hair glistens
as the rays of the afternoon sun dance brilliantly
throughout each and every strand.
Your deep brown eyes sparkle
with the intensity of a raging fire.

As our eyes meet,
I look deep inside and I am swept away
by the tender loving heart,
the pure unconditional love
and the burning embers of heavenly passion
locked away inside the realms of your lonely heart.

I strive to find the words
that unlock the secret passage,
so I might experience the hidden emotions
trapped within the sanctuary of your soul.

Emotions waiting to burst forth,
while two hearts join as one
if only for a moment...
in the hourglass of time.


© Copyright 2000 Mark Childre - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2000-10-19 09:55 PM


Bama Poet~ this left me tongue tied and wishing like mad it was written for me...*SIGH*......so beautiful.   -SEA
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-10-19 10:01 PM


First I was going to be upset about SEA giving another poet a *sigh* but after reading this I have to admit...I gave one as well.  Exquisite piece of poetry.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-10-19 10:05 PM


Perfect title for the feeling this piece gave me...this is beautiful~
BamaPoet
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34
Dothan, AL USA
4 posted 2000-10-19 10:51 PM


Thanks everyone! This person is very special to me!

"If you love someone, set them free. If they come back to you, they're yours. If not, they never were to begin with."

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