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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Disparaging Words Sleep walking disparaging words careen without merit, cast waste lands foul anchored swords toward resolve. Silent roads lacking vibrative voice box of reason leave fallen cobwebs beyond reality's cautious reach. Yesterday's drowned seaweed of disdained thoughts burrow treacherous tunnels toward destruction. Wake driven soft impressions delay accidental harm, sight bearing connection reaches beyond courtesy. Rivers of emotional magnitudes rage through many miles, meeting oceans vastness with rippled destiny in hand. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a bit on the dark side, emotional upheaval notwithstanding... good write... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
seems there's a lot of reading between the lines lately... people's feelings getting hurt... and that kinda thing.... of course, sometimes poetry isn't all that clear and the only thing we can do is TRY to interpret... sometimes, we get it wrong, i think... who knows? i was always one to directly address those who might make remarks which could be interpreted as "disparaging". Actually, just recently this happened, and i emailed a poet on this site and what she was trying to say was EXACTLY the opposite of how i took it. God, i was so embarrassed... now we are becoming great friends... of course, i don't believe in dropping names, so i won't say who it is... hehe  point is, had i not asked her directly what she meant by what she wrote, i would have continued thinking there was something negative and have had hurt feelings... i'm really glad i asked heranyway, your poem here shows hurt feelings very well... it's a good write, gloria... your writing gets better and better and i'm glad to see you writing straight from your heart, because that is what makes good poetry. hope you are well...  Lo que eres hable tan fuerte que no oigo lo que tu dices- |
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