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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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St. Valentines Wine I met St. Valentine some time ago He poured me some wine and said drink it slow Drink to your life and its hopes of love grand Drink to the wife that soon by you will stand The time will be short and then you shall weep There will be no port for a love so deep You will not love twice he said as he turned So you know the price of a love so yearned The choice now is yours to love or to not Before you two doors one cold and one hot A season of heat or cloaks for the heart Love short and sweet and regret long and tart Looking back I know I made the right choice For my heart did grow and learned to rejoice Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This was great! I really liked the message. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jamie..... 'better to have loved and lost, then never..' It is so good to see you here again. I really missed your writing!  Follow your dream! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Prometheus... a superb write and a lovely message weaved in2 rhyme!  Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jamie...this is wonderful...and just a touch sad too my friend...are you ok sweet brown eyes? So good to have you back among us. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ This is just lovely ... Good to see you and your verse. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Interesting piece, Prometheus, and with an excellent message beneath. Enjoyed the read. Michael |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Thanks all. Hope to be able to spend more time here. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hey there Jamie! This Is a well-written piece. It's nice to see you in here! Chris |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This makes me glad I have insomnia this evening. Love the read, and the picture is nice, you coming or going? "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Wonderfully written... I look forward to seeing you around more .  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jamie..i just love this...!! so wonderfully written..the story is devine  havent seen you around much..you been in the real world?? lol or maybe in another forum..? hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jamie~ Most beautiful message in this...lovely read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A great read.......lovely message. jon |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I just had to say--woohoo---Christopher said it is good....  Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful Jamie...tis better to love and lost than never love at all... (but remember my prescription! Now get out there and get it filled!) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Prometheus~ Love is always the best choice....this is wonderful.  -SEA |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey - do I get a wahoo if I say I like it too J? Cause I do...O one of wisdome etc... (yup - meter and all...  )~smile~ You need to write a Dee Dee poem...about slippers - or lack thereof LOLLOL... K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jamie, that was perfect timing for me. I think it is worth it, to feel the love, although the pain is so hard to live with. Incredible poem, thanks. Sandra |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie a beautiful and excellen piece you have written my dear Loved message too Well Done hon Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
hehehehe  Thx Jamie! cope K Read my Words. Read my Face. Don't just look at either. -C |
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