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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-19 11:54 AM


                      Dreams of the tropical rainforest
                       In the shadows of the jade moonbeams
                       making love in the dark,content as a lark
                       come hide in the shadows of my dreams

                      Come bathe in the jungles of the rainforrest
                        among the orchids and the bromeliads
                       safe from the piranha,and the anaconda
                        amongst the water lilies we will wade

                       In the sanctuaries of parrots and toucans
                       the tall bamboo and the moss doth drape
                          just the iguana's and the liana's
                      under the blanket of our jade dreamscape

                       Awaken to the abundance of sweet flora
                      turquoise waterfalls and song of fauna

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2000-10-19 11:55 AM


Someone did her homework with this one, what a lovely description you gave us with this one, Victoria.


"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



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2 posted 2000-10-19 11:56 AM


Lovely...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Victoria
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3 posted 2000-10-19 12:55 PM


Irish Rose..i needed a dictionary for sure haa...thank you sweet one..  

Thank you Sunshine..glad you enjoyed..  
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4 posted 2000-10-19 02:23 PM


Victoria~
I likee !
~*Marge*~


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ma miller
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5 posted 2000-10-19 02:29 PM


another beautiful setting you put before us, Victoria ... nice work
Victoria
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6 posted 2000-10-19 09:38 PM


thank you Marge and MA Miller..happy that you stopped by today...thank you for your nice comments..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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7 posted 2000-10-19 10:54 PM


This is beautiful...you also sparked a memory that was cause for a very wide smile...thank you~
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8 posted 2000-10-20 10:33 AM


now you have activated my imagination haa..
thank you butterflies dont cry..

                   ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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9 posted 2000-10-20 09:00 PM


Very beautiful, Victoria! Just lovely!

Denise

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