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Open Poetry #10

Leave It All Behind

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-10-19 11:52 AM

Love will last
Tell the message,
To the world,
That we still have
plenty of time,
To hold on,
Close your ears,
Don't listen to the world,
Listen what I say,
Leave It all behind,
Come to me,
I will give all my love to you,
I know,
You are hurt,
Because those people who
are around you
They are trying to hurt you,
They know ,
There is noone like me,
To love you,
You won't find anyone,
Like me In this world,
You will find few people around you,
Who care for you,
So leave the world behind
Come to me,
I will show you love,
The love that won't last love,
Leave It All Behind........,

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 10-19-2000).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2000-10-19 12:15 PM

Your message is loud and clear my friend. . .

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2000-10-19 06:57 PM

Thank you,Sven!!!!!!!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2000-10-19 07:21 PM

vandana, I liked this one, very well expressed emotions here.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2000-10-20 03:50 PM

Excellent write, vandana! I loved it!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

5 posted 2000-10-20 04:11 PM

it reminds me of an everclear song "Learning How to Smile"

an AWESOME message. i do love this one.

I am reminded of the immortal words of Socrates who said, "I drank what?"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-10-20 05:17 PM

"I will give all my love to you."
"There is none like me to love you."
All I can say is I would love to hear these words spoken from my lovers mouth..James

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