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Charisma
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0 posted 2000-10-19 11:23 AM



A New Start

Covered under a blanket where its cosy and warm,
thinking on yesterday while I enjoy the morning charm,
why should I still shed tears for the past that lie behind,
while tomorrow have her own treasures hiding in her mind,
I can't stare myself blind on the pain from the past,
recover is what I need to find myself again at last.
Now I will open my eyes and embrace the new day,
Because I decided to follow my own way,
will looking forward and not behind,
don't want to let you keep on teasing my mind.
I know that I have marked you deep down in my heart,
in spite of that I will make today a brand new start.
will behold my charm, because that's my style,
and also the passions, behind my sweet smile.

Charisma


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vandana
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1 posted 2000-10-19 12:00 PM


I LIKED IT!!!!!
Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-10-19 08:51 PM


Very beautiful and I love the confindence in your words as they show the strength in you to come out shining brightly
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3 posted 2000-10-19 11:00 PM


Yes...we can hold them close in our hearts
always and still let them "go"...a comfort
in many ways.  Beautiful work~

Charisma
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4 posted 2000-10-20 05:24 AM


vandana: glad that you liked it  

Mark: thank you for your kind words, and talking with confidence is easier than to being it. But I work on it  

butterflies don't cry: you have that right, thank you for your kind words.


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