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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Smirking and giggling and laughing out loud, They'd whisper a thought into each others ear, And heaven just smiled as they filled it with cheer. Little ones dressed in soft pink and blue, Downy soft wings with which they made do, Halos made up of rosebuds and greens, Even a few wearing flannel and jeans. I saw little cherubs swinging on stars, While others sat strumming on tiny guitars, Some chose to go on a fast comet ride, While using its tail as a heavenly slide. As wishes and prayers came up from below, They'd catch them and somehow let us all know, That as twinkling stars shine in the night, Sweet little angels are showing their might. Swinging and sliding and playing so hard, Yet keeping us safe in God's big backyard. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Bonnie* This took my breath away...such a tender piece of work and the imagery you used was exquisite...you've brought such a lovely vision to mind. Excellent writing~ |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This was sweet, but I'm not at all surprised to find that in your work, Bonnie. I like the idea of angels catching our prayers.  Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Bonnie, You leave me in awe with your poetic pen....I absolutely adore this one! Marcy |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
BDC - Thank you so much for the sweet reply, glad you enjoyed. Elizabeth - You're too kind...thanks so much. Marcy - Thanks for reading and for your kind reply, it means alot. Bonnie |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Brought a tear to my eye, since my sis passed away when she was twelve..so lovely ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Victoria - So sorry to hear of your little sis. Thanks for your kind reply. Bonnie |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Bonnie - Like no artist has ever captured with an imaginative brush - YOU - had done with your words - created a picture before my mind's eye - I find totally captivating, heart warming. Thank you so much ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bonnie, NO ONE writes in this style like you do. Your poems are delicious and leave a wonderful taste in the reader's mouth. Thank you for this taste.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Positively delightful thoughts - 'As wishes and prayers came up from below, They'd catch them and somehow let us all know, That as twinkling stars shine in the night, Sweet little angels are showing their might.' Just took a peek at the stars - and tossed up a prayer or two ! Thank you, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wilfred - Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean alot. 'Deer - Wow, I really appreciate your kind reply, thanks. Marge - Thanks so much friend, glad you enjoyed. Bonnie |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Bonnie, many applause for the wonderful visuals you've painted for me this morning! I simply adored this, and am still smiling as I write. This is a beautiful and dear verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bonnie~ I always love your sweet images of little cherubs and angels...lovely read before bed well it's bedtime for me(oz time) she say's yawning...night, night Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Nice one Bonnie, I think you take more 'than a stab at poetry'! I like the idea of normality and playfulness in your descriptions of the cherubs in heaven; it is wonderfully fun, and they are still doing the business of keeping us safe. Best Wishes Jon |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Kit - Thanks for reading, glad it brought a smile to you. Tracie - Hope you had sweet dreams, thanks for the kind reply. Jon - Thanks so much, glad you liked. Bonnie |
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