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Down by the sea
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Down by the sea |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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We met down by the sea Was a warm sunny day Cradled in your arms I was Upon the sand we lay ~~~ You held me closely to you Whispered sweet nothings in my ear The waves rolled in One by one The sunlight slowly disappeared ~~~ The moon softly crept our way As we still laid upon the sand Our bodies enveloped as one We searched the skies expance ~~~ We wished upon a star that night Our wish was to come true My wish was the same as yours To spend my life with you ~~~ To this day we still meet by the sea Wrap ourselves in our own little world Our bodies enveloped as one Once again In your loving arms I'm curled ~~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Couldn't imagine a better place to be...in the arms of the one you love with the sea singing in the background...lovely write. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ The oceans call out with love - waves of emotion cresting - 'Once again In your loving arms I'm curled' Ahhhhh ! Yes ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ this made me feel soft and warm this morning........also made me miss the ocean terribly.  -SEA |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This was as tender and gentle as the soft breeze of the morning, a beautiful piece so full of all the love you hold in your heart~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
tracie - you spoke my heart with this - with every one of the verses you so wonderfully penned here Thank you |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, this is really lovely, it's beautifully written, and so full of tenderness. I too miss the sound of the sea, and I can't think of a better place to be than wrapped in love, with the waves softly shushing before you and the warm sun overhead. Mind you with this being England, you'd probably need to be wrapped in a duvet, and hold an umberella over your head. But I still miss it, whatever the weather. Oh and I really love this poem. Take care Marsha  All I need now is the candy floss and someone selling fish and chips and I'll feel right at home!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
The perfect scene for a rendezvous..lovely Traci.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mark~ Yes it is a beatiful thing Glad you liked this Tracie~ Marge~ Hi sweet friendThat sea gets me everytime...love being close to it. Tracie Im sorry SEA for making you feel like that but I just see your name and that makes me smile thinking of the ocean right nowTracie~ Sweet bdc~ You're too kind with your reply but I accept it ...thanksTracie~ Oh Wil...thanks for this most wonderful reply, I'm glad you felt that way Tracie~ ....LOL  Marsha you're right what ever the weather, by the sea is always a delightful place to be, even when it's rough to me I always feel at peace Tracie~ Victoria~ Lovely reply...thanks Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
lovely writing........calm and reflective. Jon |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Tracie, How ironic, this is one of the great scenes, one that I really enjoy. Thank you so much to have reminded me of one of love's most wonderful feeling. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jon~ Thanks for your reply. One of the reasons I love the ocean is it always has that calming, peaceful effect Take care Tracie~ Daniel~ Glad to have made your thoughts happy one's and your sweet reply is appreciated Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Came back for a second read..so just ignore me and enjoy the sounds of surf and the tickleings of foamy surf on your toes. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect tracie...sweet kissed special memories ... all in a beautiful setting .. wonderful writing later-down-by the sea gator  jm |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'My wish was the same as yours To spend my life with you' How romantic, tracie! I really enjoyed this!! Excellent write! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mark~ You're so cheeky but that's o'k I don't mind you taking a second peek See ya Tracie~ Hello sweet Janny girl love hearing from you, thanks for your sweet reply Love ya Tracie~ sp~ Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked this...thanks Take care Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie~ Hi there! This was stunning my friend. Loved it!! I can almost see the ocean caressing the sand in my mind . . . *sigh*. Great writing!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
tracie. . . *sigh*. . . just wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear LW~ Hi to you to my friend So glad to have given you such a lovely image Love Tracie ~~~ Hello dear Sven Thanks for a most sweet reply Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
tracie- wow..this is so beautiful. i love the ocean and the sounds that go along with it...there is just something so peaceful about it. i absolutely love this. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Vicki~ So glad you liked this, thanks for your lovely reply Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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