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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2000-10-19 12:53 PM


It's beyond my reach;
It's gone away.
Melted butter. Bitter chocolate.

one last gasp as i grasp at her clasp.
The kind that makes your eyes open.
The kind that makes your mouth close.

The clasp is the end of a chain.
stones in sweet cane.
pray for rain.

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-10-19 01:36 AM


relief...so elusive sometimes...hell, Most of the time...especially liked the melted butter, bitter chocolate...have missed ya, Mike...post more, please...
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2000-10-19 01:47 AM


S'en,
Hey. I'll post more when I write more. Work is so exhausting lately. :b Man, I need to get out of there before the whole place collapses.

Mike

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3 posted 2000-10-19 01:50 AM


Hey.  It was a request darlin'...get some sleep...I'll e ya soon...I get tired too.  Love ya much.  E ya in the morning.
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4 posted 2000-10-19 08:18 AM


Mike~ very cool poem.   -SEA
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2005-11-25 02:28 PM


Some people you never stop missing.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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6 posted 2005-11-25 07:12 PM


where is he anyway...I think of him often

M

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