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Tango of Time |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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In the shade of love and the breeze of enchantment < !signature-->the beauty and the beast walk hand in hand loves wears a mask in many disguises sometimes you dont recognize love at all love is a dance..at the masquerade ball love is taking a chance in the tangos of time In the shade of love and the breeze of enchantment look out for the grape on the dance floor of love A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like the last line. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Victoria, You've captured it well, the chances taken on love. Nicely done, I liked. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
all the chances and you can still slip i love it i love it the whole bit and baboodle |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whoops, there I go stepping on the grape again, and I had the whole rest of the floor to step on, too. Wouldn't you know it? Great lines, Victoria. Damn, but I relate to everything I read lately. Catalinamoon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Elizabeth..you like it until you slip..better watch out Elizabeth haa..  Gentle..yes you never can depend on love can you?..Thank you Gentle..  Walt..Hi there Walt..nice to hear from you..WHOOPS..there i go again haa.. Catalinamoon..Well im not happy to hear you can relate to this one..but maybe things will bet better real soon.. thank you..A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
As someone who loves to dance, I loved that last line more than anything! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
And so do I Irish Rose.. thank you..glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm willing to tango... watch out for the banana peeling...James |
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