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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2000-10-18 03:42 PM


Greetings from Absentia
where you will never hear,
a word from most of Passion's poets
for reasons which are clear.
For if they were to lose their way
and come here by mistake,
a few replies will otherwise
point out the path to take.
Though few would chose to visit here
there is a well marked path,
just post alot but don't reply
(I know, I've done the math ).
You will not get there right away
like all things it takes time,
but soon you may as well perform
your works in pantomime !
But , then again if solitude
is truly what you seek,
drop in but please don't think me rude
because I seldom speak .

Doc

Editor's note:
Dr.Moose1 is currently on assignment in Absentia, N.Y. (pop: 0) , where he is working on a new thesis titled " Am I The Only One That Doesn't Get It ?".
After a brief visit with relatives in the neighboring twin city of Dementia, N.Y. (pop:?)he plans to return as a semi-participating contributor to the Passion's site.



[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 10-18-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-10-18 04:29 PM


Doc~ this is just too good. Really liked this one.   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-10-18 04:38 PM


DrMoose~

I JUST LOVE IT !
Think it'll sink in ???
Duh !  

Nifty write, my friend.
~*Marge*~



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Andrew Scott
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3 posted 2000-10-18 08:03 PM


Hey Doc Moose... Here in California we have a place like that... its called Amboy, populattion 13, at least that's what the sign said. Personally I think that number is a little inflated.  Yep!, Amboy, third armpit of the world... right between Needles and Blyth... the other two armpits. Makes Death Valley look like a New York disco-tech.  Hope you make it out of your own personal Hell soon.  Peace Bro!  
Denise
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4 posted 2000-10-18 09:51 PM


This is wonderfully creative, Doc! I love it!

Denise

Martie
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5 posted 2000-10-18 10:04 PM


Doc--loved this---you are too cute!
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6 posted 2000-10-18 11:13 PM


I'm looking forward to reading the thesis, doc...and I think I "get" it...
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2000-10-18 11:47 PM


you are so durn creative mister moose man love yur stuff
wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2000-10-18 11:55 PM


i replied to this and at least on my page it didnt bump up  grrrrrrr
Dr.Moose1
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9 posted 2000-10-19 04:57 PM


Sea,Marge,Drew,d,Martie,serenity,and Wayouts 1&2,
Darn, I know I should be taking the time to reply to each one of you seperately, but then again , that would be in direct contrast
to the theme here ,now wouldn't it ? Hah Hah!
So suffice it to say ,Thank you all !!!!
Doc

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