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Roses Need Rain
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~~Roses Need Rain~~ How much does one need love? As much as a rose needs rain? to feel the touch of silver drops melt in stems stretched high soothes the empty core A refreshed bud becomes a loved rose it's essence filled made complete by love perfected in purpose A reason to need love... BloomingRose |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is now a favorite of mine, I just loved the whole concept, yes, when a Rose receives love she certainly blooms. Very nicely done. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you much. Glad you enjoyed reading. deb |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
If you were a rose in my garden. You would know love before it rained. Wonderful piece. I enjoyed it. Alan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I had to read this again, I adore it and Alan's reply was poetry waiting to be written....see how we all inspire one another? "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So if I brought a watercan filled with the love of a friend would the rose find the quenching is so deserves? Lovely write Deb, and yes that is a reasond to need love. This one blooms all over the page. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a lovely poem..bloomingRose..love does make one feel beautiful. Makes you feel like youre a bloomingRose..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mona Lisa Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 100Halifax, Nova Scotia |
I love roses! And I love poems about roses. This one conveys the beauty of a rose just perfectly. Thanks for the good read. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BloomingRose, The finest words describing the beauty of roses and love, you are just perfect. "it's essence filled made complete by love" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Needs more watering I believe. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Alan~ Thanks, guess it sounds like my roses nearly died....lol not so just away for the season. Kathleen~ Thank you, Glad you like. Mark~ lol, Just another one of my forsaken roses in the yard made me think the poor thing needs a little love, just like people. Victoria~ Thank you, glad you saw a little beauty there. Mona~ Thanks. I too love to write about flowers, roses are my favorite. Daniel~ To me there is nothing quite as lovely as a red rose in full bloom. I love the fall season, but hate to see the flowers go. |
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