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The Beat Is Esoteric Time
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The Beat Is Esoteric Time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The beat is esoteric time Crooned by tune and tuned by croon I tried to write a rhapsody. Verse by verse and rhyme by rhyme Written in esoteric time. Chime by chime in word and line In peels of sound that sounds align Echoing in soothing sighs Reverberate like lullabies. To swim and scent about your head Like winter scenes when snow is spread. Like summers warm that makes one go To places that you do not know. To wonder in its ecstasy Veiled in dreams of fantasy It is a world we much prefer It is a world we all defer. Hoping that these sing song phrases Will bring about some magic hazes. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, the rhapsody is now firmly ensconced in my head... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, So sings the song of Seymour bringing forth fantastic beat , that noise I hear upon the floor must be my tapping feet ! |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
now i'll have this tune in my head the rest of the day (just kiddin', Seymour) ... very clever ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Hoping that these sing song phrases Will bring about some magic hazes.' Yes, indeedy !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Crooned by tune and tuned by croon I tried to write a rhapsody. Verse by verse and rhyme by rhyme Written in esoteric time ================== To wonder in its ecstasy Veiled in dreams of fantasy It is a world we much prefer It is a world we all defer. Hoping that these sing song phrases Will bring about some magic hazes. ================= strumming my bain with your pen ...  ya wrap me day in purple haze .... WAY COOL my man of mystical melodics ... later-not so obscure-gator jm |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Even a tone deaf guy like me can tap a toe to this one, Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, One down and the rest of the world to go. *L* Dr Moose1, Cute reply, thanks. MA Miller, Thank you and keep the beat. Marge, Yes indeedy, thank you sweety. JM, Winkiewinkie. Balladeer, Thanks for the toe tap. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--You do bring magic...for sure, just by being you...love this poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you and love you. Sy |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Seymour-I keep picturing "Moons in June" and "Harbor Lights", very nicely done melody of words. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- wonderful!! you really got my toes tapping with this one.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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