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Oh How I Love You! |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
Oh, how I love you my heart has wings to soar and everything has meaning now more substance than before Oh, how I want you to live between each breath and stay there, just forever mine unending, treasured, kept Oh, how I trust you beyond unspoken words and those I utter lyrically are rhapsodies unstirred Oh, how I honor you with smiles, tears and laughter you're all I ever needed for now, and everafter < !signature--> Emily [This message has been edited by emily (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
These are very precious words..James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh, how I love you my heart has wings to soar and everything has meaning now more substance than before Oh, how I want you to live between each breath and stay there, just forever mine unending, treasured, kept Oh, how I trust you beyond unspoken words and those I utter lyrically are rhapsodies unstirred Oh, how I honor you with smiles, tears and laughter you're all I ever needed for now, and everafter Such beautiful and tender words  Lovely read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Emily, this is a beautifully worded poem Well done on a fine achievement. "you are all I ever needed For now and ever after" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Emily, a tender and heartfelt recital of love and contentment. A pleasure to read. Robert Joseph |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Emily~ this is beautiful and very touching! first piece of your work that i have read...i shall be looking forward to reading more. "Oh, how I trust you beyond unspoken words and those I utter lyrically are rhapsodies unstirred Oh, how I honor you with smiles, tears and laughter you're all I ever needed for now, and everafter" Beautiful!! take care. amy |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
James: Thank you, yes, precious is a word I love to think of when being in love. Tracie: Thank you, also for reading my poem! Daniel, JD: Thank you I guess every poem seems like an achievement in a way doesn't it? Robert: I appreciate your response to my poem!!! Thank you Aimster: Thank you Amy, that was an encouraging thing to say! Emily |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi emily, Nicely done emily, it seems the someone has someone special. You expressed it well. Bill |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Emily~ this is SO sweet! -SEA |
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