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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-10-17 11:38 PM

Hearts destined to beat
Beautiful rhythm nsync
Hearts connecting to life
Love oxygens mask
Breath endlessly met
every stroke of this test
Machine is on flat line
but once you kissed me
My heart skipped a beat
YOu awakened me from this
deep sleep.

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 10-17-2000).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-18 01:07 AM

RB1229~ Ahhhhhh, Sleeping Beauty has nothing on you. this is great!

-SEA

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2000-10-18 01:17 AM

"Hearts connecting to life"

Rosebud,
Lovely message, as long as that heart beats we are connected to life.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

3 posted 2000-10-18 01:34 AM

Sweet... I really enjoyed this.

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

4 posted 2000-10-18 02:19 AM

"Machine is on flat line
but once you kissed me
My heart skipped a beat
YOu awakened me from this
deep sleep."

Your poem was very touching and the above lines were particularly touching. Thank you for an interesting read.

TLS

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2000-10-18 02:28 AM

Oh WOW!!!
What a wonderful little poem...loved it

Hearts destined to beat
Beautiful rhythm nsync
Hearts connecting to life
Love oxygens mask
Breath endlessly met
every stroke of this test
Machine is on flat line
but once you kissed me
My heart skipped a beat
YOu awakened me from this
deep sleep.

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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