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Holly Blue's Song

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Trew
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25 posted 10-18-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Trew   Email Trew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trew

Wow!  You know, you read and you read and there are just so many good poems on this site, it is amazing.  And then you come across something like this and you just get blown away.  The images, the flow, everything about it seems so effortless, so natural.
Great poem, Mark, great poem...
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


26 posted 10-19-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Karilea-Good, I am glad to hear it.

Mona Lisa-Thank you, I am so glad you stopped by.

Charisma-Thank you much..so am I.

Trew -Thank you my friend.  I am glad that you liked it and effortless only because it is from the heart.
Irish Rose
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27 posted 10-19-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

How did I miss this one?  This is great, how did you do this?  Not only the theme but the entire image, it's wonderful!!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen


ma miller
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28 posted 10-19-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for ma miller   Email ma miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ma miller

beautiful work, Mark ... everything's in place ... well done
Rosebud1229
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29 posted 10-20-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

Mark this one is a keeper, so I will add it to my library, the words are sprinkled with magic, and I thank you for sharing. It has so much beauty in every word.
Marsha
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30 posted 10-20-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Mark my friend, what did i tell you the MBOOPAS, adore this one, absolutly adore it. So as I promised I would, here are the replies.

Oh wow                            Sue
I'm dumb, honestly I can't speak  Pat
(she's never quiet, some achievement)
Seriously this is so beautiful    Fran
Oh Yes!!                          David
Beautiful, really is              Delia
I love this one best              Mel
This is so good                   Jan
I think this is my one            Kelsy
This is the best yet              Daphnie

As I said I've no idea what will happen come the end of the year, because your work just gets better. Anyway, many thanks from MBOOPAS who send you a loud cheer, they will also be taosting your health in the pub tonight.
Take care
                     Marsha
                  
Dee
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31 posted 10-20-2000 07:06 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Mark, your talent never ceases to amaze me. Words from the heart are the best gift you can give the one you love.
Dee
Wilfred Yeats
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32 posted 10-20-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

you get
TWO CROWNS
for this one
mine
AND
your original
the problem returns


We cannot tell what may happen to us in the strange medley of life.
But we can decide what happens in us... how we can take it, what we
can do with it


[This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 10-20-2000).]
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


33 posted 10-20-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Just to let you know, she must know...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ


Parker
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... the old black rum


34 posted 10-21-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Mark Bravo on this, great piece... great to read..  

Parker
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


35 posted 10-21-2000 08:50 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Kathleen-Thank you so much, I am so glad that you enjoyed it.

Mark-Thank you and yes, all is at it is meant to be.

Rosebud1229-Wow, I am honored to be in your library but can think of no better way to get there but by penning the beauty of a true friend.

Marsha,Sue,Pat,Fran,David,Delia,Mel,Jan,Kelsy,and Daphnie-Thank you all so very much.  I look forward to hearing from each and everyone of you each time.  Now, don't go choosing your favorite so early, there is still many weeks left in the year.LOL  Hugs to you all.

Dee-Thank you and yes they are along with "Unconditional" love and freedom to be themselves.

Wilfred-Now sir, you have put me in a dilema haven't you?  Thank you so much, I appreciate it but I know the reign will be short lived with you out there.

Karilea-I believe she does...thank you much.

Parker-Thank you much, it was a pleasure to write this one.
Kit McCallum
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36 posted 10-21-2000 09:18 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh Mark ... I'm so behind on my reading the last few days, but as they say, better late than never! I'm so glad I did not miss this incredible piece. Absolutely stunning, in both it's presentation and style. The descriptiveness brings such beautiful visions to mind ... wonderfully picturesque! Into "my" library this goes ...  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Kethry
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37 posted 10-21-2000 09:19 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Mark,
what an amazing post for an amazing person. this is the best so far.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy
Alle'cram
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38 posted 10-21-2000 10:08 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

..I came by to read this jewel again & discovered I failed to leave a reply...

You left me speechless with this one...now, I remember why!!  Very very good writing.
Marcy
dgvarner
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39 posted 10-21-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

very sweet mark..you must be some kind of great friend ..    very nice thoughts for a person you must love much..

hugs, dg


my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


40 posted 10-21-2000 03:22 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Kit-my friend, you are not the only one that is behind in their replies.  I have not as much time as I used to so please do not feel bad.  I am honored that you would put this in your library and you not only honor me but you honor the sweetest and most caring person that I have ever known as it is truely "her" poem, not mine.  I only penned what I have been blessed to see.  Thank you my friend.

Kethry-She is amazing for sure.  Thank you much.

Marcy-Thank you dearly and for you to take the time to read again is the greatest compliment a poet could get, reply or not.

dgvarner-Yes, I do love my friend as she has taught me much in how special "TRUE" friendship can be and how "unconditional" it is.  Thank you so very much for stopping by.
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41 posted 08-20-2005 01:34 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria


If you were to do all of this with open eyes and tender heart
If you could just imagine the touch of what all of this brings
If you were to look into a butterflies soul each and every part
Then you would hear the song that Holly Blue's heart sings


I know this to be true!  Just a beautiful write, and sorry I wasn't around to get these first round, but printed it for my book of Passions poets this time!  
 
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