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In Quest Of Ancient Visions
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In Quest Of Ancient Visions |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In Quest Of Ancient Visions ~*Marge Tindal*~ <~~~~~~~> White Feather embarks Greatest journey is at hand On wisdom-winged owl <~~~~~> Ancient Spirits speak Echoes of the Vision Quest Peace lays at my feet <~~~~~~~> Spirit Wolf watches Coming true of great tellings Lone voice cries in night <~~~~~> Spirit Bear joins in Sacred circle grows with pride Legends dance in fire <~~~~~~~> Majestic Eagle Soars upon the flight of night Sun breaks morning sky <~~~~~> Glowing embers left Campfire circled gathering Peacefully seeking <~~~~~~~~> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ these are BEAUTIFUL!!! I just love the images they bring to mind!  -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
White Feather soars high crested wings of eagle smile tradition lives on  Buffalo runs hard dusted trail of dryness cries searching lost lovers Pipe of peace now set within circle of knowledge resting among friends Beautiful 5-7-5's my friend....no one does them better. I learn from only the best don't you know. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ancient vision's quest Looks into the night to see Balladeer's old face  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Feathers of the night Flying in flocks of friendship Firmly holding on Balladeer~ Visions brought to mind Flickering of fond friendship Holding face in smiles *You guys are the greatest ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Special thoughts of you Keep comforting this lady You are so special ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
lovliness in bloom |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This one made me want a marshmellow! I love it!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Horsewoman rides strong seeking White Feather's strength, song uniting two minds Over Mother Earth riding hard, searching for truth White Feather holds tight to all shall come this strength, truth, song, love, life, light, then The Great Father smiles Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, always a pleasure to read your work...your passions are evident in each word you share. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
whispering pines dance as they bow to the mountain on reservation ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Her gentle spirit Pens such majestic visions For our hearts to view Beautiful Marge ... each and every one! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Joy flows from within Feather quilled dip of my think Soars on legends wing Kathleen~ Roasting puff so sweet Blazing mellow of the marsh Graham crackered delight Karilea~ Horsewoman of night Rides herd on gathered spirits Legends glow with pride RJ~ Pleasures of passion Penning poetic phrases Pleasantly perused Victoria~ Windblown melody Swaying pines dance in delight Mountain comes to life Kit~ Spirit gently bows Voices echo from the past Visions yet to share *Thanks to all of you for sharing my poetic passion. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
simple life within wisdom found in ink of pen serenity smiles |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, Majestic Awesome Remarkable Gracious Effervescent Thank you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
instead of sending you a haiku, i thought i'd make you a nice rhyme or two. these sets of syllables seventeen of spirits unseen are beautiful indeed. they are very thanksgiving-esque, and there are a couple lines that i like best: "Lone voice cries in night" and "Legends dance in fire" those simple expressions left quite the impressions and i have thoroughly enjoyed your haiku session. well penned. i love the vision quest theme! I am reminded of the immortal words of Socrates who said, "I drank what?" |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful collection! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Crazy Horse showed us Great strength of a brave bear the day he pointed ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Crazy Horse had pointed over the horizen and said, "My home is where my people lie..." I really admire and respect the tribes, and I shared you're poems with a bunch of friends of mine... Everyone was really impressed and asked me to pass on their thanks for the images all of the haikus brought forth.. So, from the Sioux, Lakota, and Cherokee tribe members I know...I'd like to extend a warm thankyou.. Everyone really LOVED these.. Thanks to all who wrote... Special thanks to Marge for starting this chain..  < !signature--> With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. [This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ These ancient visions are so beautiful and peaceful....just devine Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Simplicity sings Serenity's so-soft song Spreading smiles sweetly JD~ Acrostic measure Gracious pleasuring is mine Inspiration spreads Ethan~ Rhyming words so sweet Grace the page that bears your name Thanks, Ethan Halo EagleOne~ My heart's collection Spread out for others Seeking friends understanding BrokenWingedAngel~ Brothers all are we Sioux, Lakota, Cherokee Joined in Vision Quest Tracie~ Eagle focuses Peace walks on the horizon May all see it's light *You all make it so meaningful to write. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
These are lovely, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Heritage pride seen In spirits night gatherings Sharing with you all ~*Marge*~ < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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