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Recollections [from WAY back...] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Recollections Recollections remain in the nadir of my mind I watch descending rain to quietly pass the time. A recollect of tune in the sole of my mind it was our ruin in the channels of rhyme. A recall of colors blue eyes mixing with green all those pulsing colors taken leave with the dream A memory of touch close and warm though needed much never again to be born. A recall of tears falling freely, fast & vast for its time our love, you said, had past. A memory of crying long moments of while by & by soft sobs of sighing too soon for a smile. Now I wear wise the smile over what wasn't meant to be forthwith recollecting remains and watch it rain all the while ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 24 September, 2000 Circa 1968 |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wow, that is quite a while ago. I'm glad you still have it, because I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you formatted it too. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ If this is a repost, I'm glad you did. I really enjoyed this.  -SEA |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I like the layout...and your words move so smoothly... Neat!  Very well done.With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Oh, I like very much ! The format is quite stunning and the content is more than satisfying. Nicely done, poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth, I'm glad I still "have it" too... thank you... SEA, thank you...but it was never posted, just from my personal ancient archives... BWA, thank you... Marge, my thanks to the poetess mistress... < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, this is an oldie? I don't believe it, this just goes to show that you were always good, doesn't it!! Stunningly presented, and written so beautifully. That's it, I'm going to get myself a new head, and this time I want the one that works!! You know that this is good don't you, and that I love it! I knew you did!! Take care Marsha  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Marsha, I was 17...and I will admit, when I pulled this out recently, there were only two words that I changed... but that was all... and I am very glad you liked it... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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