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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Come rest your weary head upon my shoulder come now and let me soothe thy furrowed brow. Do not tarry long amongst your troubles allow the tides of time to cleanse your soul. When your heart is laden full of sorrow thy peace will be found in my love. Burden me with what thou fearest most as I calm thee with words of comfort. Let thy spirit soar upon the skies amongst clouds with silver linings. Let thy heart no longer feel heavy as we share in sweet sorrows song. Let our love carry us into the 'morow Confident of a love that is more than a certainty On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
GS~ this is so lovely......I'm stuck for pretty words for this..........just know I loved it!  -SEA |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
14 beautiful lines - and just what I needed to read - thank you so much ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, Bill, Thank you both so much. Your words mean much to me. Thanks, D |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Hi Gentle Spirit, Your name comes thru strong in this poem- 'When your heart is laden full of sorrow thy peace will be found in my love.' lovely, Best wishes Jon |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful..carries a hope that Love is still there for us even if we stumble...love will reach for us and embrace us...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gentle Spirit, let me be one of those that WELCOME's you to Passions...and may I introduce you to Sven...look up his work, you will find much in entertainment in the "olde world sense" and this, I have enjoyed, very much! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
jonmcm Thank you so much for the kind words. I put alot of thought into that name, and it just felt right. jmlee12345 JM, I think that love and hope go hand in hand. Thanks so much! Sunshine Thanks alot, and yes I haven't had much time to read everyone here yet, the only down side to my limited time, but I have enjoyed Sven's words already! Thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
this is so angelic, so gentle I felt a calmness around me when reading this, you're certainly a Gentle Spirit! Thank you Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank YOU for such a wonderful compliment DA. Everyone here is making me feel so welcome. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank YOU for such a wonderful compliment DA. Everyone here is making me feel so welcome. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, I have already met Gentle Spirit through her wonderful writing, but thank you for introducing her to me. . . and me to her. . . Gentle Spirit, thy words are indeed wonderful, and this poet indeed hopes that thou wouldst continue to enlighten and entrance this assembly with more from thy golden pen. . . I thank thee. . . ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sven, I wouldst try to continue to please thine eyes with mine words. Thank thee for thy kindness.  |
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