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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Where Love Lives If you dared to perceive with an eye toward clarity beyond tangential vision past shuttered windows through hedge rows, trees and fences - as safety’s illusion fades from focus you would be amazed by life without guise. © Corinne Bailey |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ BRAVO!!  -SEA |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Corinne, I read this to be a commentary on the true condition of the american family......am I close ? |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
More said in fewer words with this post - than ANY I've read here or any other forum! Bravo! 10*'s at the very least |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you kindly, SEA! Lonely Stranger, - American Family and human individual as well. Bill, thank you very much! Corinne |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I think you said so much in such a wonderful poem! Kathleen |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If I could see past my monitor, I would be amazed at life in general. Is it still out there? |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Irish Rose! "Deer," get thee outside and enjoy the day (or night!). Anytime! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ What a neat write. Splendid thoughts ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Marge! Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
EXCELLENT!!!!! You've said so much here in such few words. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, a very important piece by you. It says alot, and maybe to alot of us. Too much focus on things that are not that important while the world is clearly there to experence. Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Hoot and Park! Corinne |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is very deep..ikinde had to read it over a couple of times but I get what you're saying...great meassage! Nathan |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Nate. All about losing fear and boundaries and opening up possibilities. Corinne |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it a lot!!!!!!!! |
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