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Fall Duet
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Fall Duet |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
sudden nor'easter shakes leaves from shivering trees - steals light from the day. The shadows lengthen - morning leaves a fringe of frost on front porch pumpkins. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beki~ simply stunning, this duet of yours!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
I like, I like! Great description here. Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beki, Great poem! Leaves shaking from shivering... good imagery here. deb |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you,SEA, Azure, and Rose..I appreciate your generous comments |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So very nice to see you Beki... I really enjoyed your duo - Hoping all is well...  Pristeen fallen snow Boughs in Nature's silent prayer Laving sullied earth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beki~ Winter tease tiptoes Fallen frost in soft surround Glistens on meadows *Quite an inspirational view you weave. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely haiku's beki..enjoyed reading.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great to see you back, Beki... but what's frost? *G* |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks everyone, it is great to be back...haven't been writing much and busyness of school (yep, gone back to school, something Ihave looked forward to a long time) and work have kept me away from as much time online. Marge and Nan, loved your haiku, both wonderful! Victoria, I appreciate your reading and comments. Suthern, wonderful to see you my friend...and frost...something we in SoCal only dream about |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
please forgive me, boosting this up for one more go round things here get buried soooo fast! |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Not what I expected... but what a pleasant surprise. Simply delicious!  ~ Beth I hate quotations. Tell me what you know. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Beth.....it is my delight to surprise you ... |
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