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Child Of Mine |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Child Of Mine Born to me, a gift of love eye's that said I love you, and know you a time we shared, all snug and warm I kept you safe, in tummy's waiting place Time showed a near clone of me eye's, hair, smile the need to be held close to feel mama's warm touch Soon you grew to a crazy stage the teenage, grownup wanna be age hair do's, hair don'ts I need some money you'd say honey, money don't grow on trees Now you are all grownup a picture of beauty still need me honey? sure hope so... I sure need you Love Always, Mama BR [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BR~ I knew from the title, this would make me cry....so here I am....crying.....this is so sweet.  -SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BloomingRose, Exactly how it is. You have told in a poem a lifetime of reality, as a child grows and confronts parents and society. Magical and sincere. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
SEA~ Thanks I am glad you like this, I think I needed to express just a touch of what she means to me. Daniel~ Yep, being a parent brings many things, joys, tears, crazy days... thanks for reading |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
Blooming Rose, Sadly I have never been able to share the experience of Motherhood, but you made me feel the joy all the same. Thank you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
BloomingRose- wow...this is so beautiful and full of love. you've left no question as to how much she means to you, and how much you love her. (((hugs))), -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I liked this. Very sweet. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow! All this mother's love in the forums tonight. First a butterfly and now a rose. Wonderful loving verse from you my friend and I know that you will have her hugging you over this one. Beautiful and full of your warming love. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Deb* This is so beautiful...there is nothing purer or more heart warming than watching a child grow...excellent work~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Nothing glows brighter than the light of our children in our hearts. Beautifully penned. That's Moms ! That's us ! God is good. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Poet Sis~ Sometimes the things we miss in life, God will replace with another gift... Thanks for stopping by Vicky~ Thanks, and yes she means the world to me. Elizabeth~ Thanks for reading. There are so many things I could write about when it comes to my children. I have a son so I need to post one for him too. Mark~ Thanks for reading. she is special for sure. Butterflies~ I agree with you, there is no greater love than between a mother and her children. Marge~ She is the light of my life. Glad you liked this one. Thanks |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Debra...what a sweet tribute to your daughter. I do hope you shared this with her |
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