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Local Rebel
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0 posted 2000-10-17 03:04 PM


Digressions spun from some
sloppy non sequitur
the sour ringside pusses
glide me non-stop
via ups or maybe some
other over-nite

package mover
from spurn to spurn
like I'd spin my sis
or spoon a nun

and indulge me snoops
I should be having
more fun than Elvis
but I'm not

I'm pissed

Because I didn't get
the memo and missed
somehow
the meeting(s)
(not to mention the sin)

but the lies are lost
on me the onus on
the spinners slurs
my solo sin having been
the deign of a pun
misconstrued

and ipso facto
were I slurping
all these spoils by some
grand design
I'd plop my VIP name
in the pool
for November's Tuesday
and count on
some presidential aid
page by page

but who knows
maybe it was just some
mis-laid pronoun out there
spiraling through the IRS
(internet relay slander)
and I admit I'm no
pius son of a gelding sir

and if all this golden glitter
brightens up somebody's
less than stellar day
then I'm happy to be the
poison pill
and it's not like I never
glossed over the sludge
or polished the tarnish
off my halo

(has anybody seen it anywhere?)

ah... what the hell?
Life's short

Shut up
And LISP ME...  



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azure
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 52

1 posted 2000-10-17 03:53 PM


Well, what do I say except that I LOVE pissed-off poetry that drips with sarcasm - you certainly have talent in that area!

Azure
"I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros

RainbowGirl
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2 posted 2000-10-17 03:54 PM


A forum where I've been#

a thing became thong
the right became wrong
true came the lie
a dream did die
If you're drunk
then what am I?

HUSG

Ps: what's that, you want Snoops, catch!!!



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Local Rebel
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3 posted 2000-10-17 04:25 PM


Is snoops drunk too???  lol....

HuggsZzz back Cindy...

and um... thanks Azure -- do I know you from somewhere????  

RainbowGirl
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4 posted 2000-10-17 04:35 PM


"Is snoops drunk too???  lol...."

Nah, but he's dreaming cause his paws are quivering...LOL

HUSG

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-17-2000).]

Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

5 posted 2000-10-17 05:10 PM


I swear I didn't hide the memo....now with my mind, lately, I could have forgotten to give it to you...but really *totally innocent look* it wasn't me...I have been in my office reading philosophy all day  
great poem...and hey if you are looking for cats...you can have the one my daughter forgot to take with her lol

am sorry I know you are ticked, but just had to say rofg@spoon a nun.....

[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 10-17-2000).]

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
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6 posted 2000-10-17 06:05 PM


you wanna be lithped? well, lithen to thith!

I could thing you a thong
thince a thong should be thung,
but thometimes my thinging
thounds like a thour tongue....
What i mean, ith it'th thorta
like thinging tholo....
you'll wish thounds were tho low
it'th thilent....and thooooo,
if you want me to thing you
a thweet little thong,
jutht thit there and lithen,
and try to be thtrong
'cauth you may like my thinging,
I could thertainly hope,
but you altho may want my lipth
washed out with thoap!


*wink*  
suakm

theriouthly though, gothip thuckth... if it'th on the internet or on the thtreet... it thcrewth with people'th heartth headth and thanity... tho... whatever it wath that got you riled, try to forget about it and chalk it up to myth-interpretation... or whatever or strobe lights or something...
date it...


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azure
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7 posted 2000-10-17 06:24 PM


Nope, I'm the new girl, just hangin' out - pretty interesting things going on here!
Jhonbus
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since 2000-10-12
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8 posted 2000-10-17 06:29 PM


Thanks! Strange how when unhappy, others' feelings of anger seem to cheer people up (or is it just me.....)  

http://www.geocities.com/i_love_you_so_much_c/

Andrew Scott
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9 posted 2000-10-17 06:49 PM


Read it, enjoyed it although I didn't quite understand all of it... but then maybe I'm feeling just a little to happy right now to capture the full mood of it.  At least your anger is constructive... which is more than I can say for most. Wish I could write as well when such a mood strikes.

... and to Lady Peri... you're cute when you're drunk.  

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2000-10-17 07:07 PM


NUN SPOONING?  you kinky thing you...gotta love it... wath awthome...
Parker
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11 posted 2000-10-17 07:13 PM


Rebel, this piece rocks. Great expresionism..

Parker

Local Rebel
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12 posted 2000-10-17 09:34 PM


RG -- keep snoops out of trouble then -- you know how he gets when he dreams...  

Corazon -- now you know that I kick kitties... rofl  

Fair Poet Danther :  yep and I'm thick and tired of people callin me a thkirt chather.... I'll have everybody know lot-th of the women I chathe wear jeanth or thorth or thometimeth thongth -- I'm not thome thallow thkirt chather...  


Azure -- just thought you might be an acquaintance -- you came in here posting like a veteran

Jhonbus -- glad you got a smile...

Thanks Andrew -- yeah -- Dor is adorable aint she?

Serenity -- I have not yet begun to kink... lol...  


Parker -- thank you sir...

and to all... a good night..


Balladeer
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13 posted 2000-10-18 12:13 PM


Nice warning shot across the bow, reb  

Have you ever imagined a world with no hypothetical situations?

pandora
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Posts 184

14 posted 2000-10-18 02:14 PM


not to make light of your pome, mr. hawke,
'cause i sure wouldn't want any people to talk,
so i'll shut up and get to the point of reply --
i'm a kittycat, sir, if you want to know why!
so that's why i'm here to meow and be heard --
i won't tolerate kicking from ANY big bird!

so, fly over closer and threaten again
and you might find ruffed feathers as your  world starts to spin!
you say you like kicking some kitties? oh PLEASE!  
this kittycat's begging, she's down on her knees...
just TRY it and hear the meow and the purr
'cause THIS cat won't stand for you ruffling fur!

i'll shut up now, hawkebird, and leave you in fact...
but you best stay away, to find feathers intact!!  

i'm hawke-eyed!!! purrrrrrfectly fine with me! meeeeeeeeeeooowwwta here!

beware pandora's box...


suthern
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15 posted 2000-10-18 02:33 PM


I think your halo rolled away in that long ago ring toss game and was obliterated by a passing truck. *S* (Which leaves me to wonder... just what have you been polishing since then? *EG*)
JamesMichael
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16 posted 2000-10-18 04:29 PM


You have a great command of the slow burn...James
Kethry
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17 posted 2000-10-18 04:39 PM


Reb,
I'm not sure I got the context, but it was a fine read, I too like the "spooning a nun" as for being a skirt chaser what else would you chase? Cats maybe?
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Local Rebel
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18 posted 2000-10-18 05:52 PM


What's that kitty kat?
How'd you find me here?
not that I was Hiding
mind you
we Hawkes have no fear  

You say
to tussle me
mess me up
rumple my feathers
unsettle my stuff...

the kind of thing
a kitty would do
to Big Bird's
with a great big shoe...

But kitty
listen...
did I say Kick???

a kitty???

I must be sick

I couldn't hurt
a feline fair
wouldn't harm her
not one hair

so you must be
really on some trip
you been smoking
more cat nip?

no kicking really  

that would be rude
where'd you get
that attitude?  

but try to catch me
what the heck?
and you'll get
a big hawke peck!  




[This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 10-18-2000).]

Local Rebel
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19 posted 2000-10-18 05:55 PM


auntie -- so that's where my halo went... damn.. um... I mean.. darn  

deer -- thanks -- hope I didn't hit anything out there in the water..

kethry -- I think that cat is chasing me???    lol


thanks James Lee

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