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Victoria
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0 posted 10-17-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Victoria

Would you like to spend the night?
listening to the raindrops fall
while the ecstasy of the rain
flows with passion down the wall

Would you like to spend the night?
wrapped in my love so warm
as the candle flickers with desire
while our shadows, tremble in the storm

Would you like to spend the night?
in a dark wonderland
while the only thing I wear
is just a pearl on a strand

Would you like to spend the night?
under a canopy of lace
on ivory sheets of satin
in our silhouetted embrace



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
Daniel J D
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1 posted 10-17-2000 03:24 PM       View Profile for Daniel J D   Email Daniel J D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniel J D

Victoria,
"Would you like to spend the night?
wrapped in my love so warm
as the candle flickers with desire
while our shadows, tremble in the storm"

You are such a romantic it shows all over this piece of magnetic power.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
Victoria
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2 posted 10-17-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

I think all poets all romantic's..how could they write about love?..so glad you enjoyed JD..appreciate you kind comments.

                          ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
Parker
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3 posted 10-17-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Ok Victoria, you've convinced me, I'd love to spend the night. Just give me directions.  

Parker
Alan
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right next door


4 posted 10-17-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for Alan   Email Alan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alan

With the offer being so sweetly put...my answer would have to be yes. ;0)
Wonderful poem. Wonderful thoughts.
I enjoyed it a lot.
Victoria
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5 posted 10-17-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Oh!  Parker and Alan i do have a decision to make..a very hard choice haa...i will have to get back to you both later haa...

                

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
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How lovely, Victoria. If I was a man I would say yes  
Victoria
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7 posted 10-18-2000 08:15 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Thank you CatalinaMoon..and I love that name..

                     ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
Irish Rose
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8 posted 10-19-2000 12:06 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

wow!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen


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9 posted 10-19-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I liked it a lot!!!!!!!
Victoria
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10 posted 10-19-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

thank you irish rose and vandana..im so glad you enjoyed ..appreciate your comments..

                      ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
Butterflies_dont_cry
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11 posted 10-19-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Very sensual writing Victoria this is beautiful~
Victoria
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Thank you "butter flies dont cry"..im so glad you enjoyed and thank you so much for visiting tonight..

                        ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)
JamesMichael
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13 posted 08-05-2005 02:19 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I believe that I would...such luscious writing...James
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14 posted 11-18-2010 02:44 AM       View Profile for sasanka7   Email sasanka7   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for sasanka7

Very nice.
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