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A Silent Road
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A Silent Road |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
A silent road lay before me like an ocean all alone Silence conquers my dark feelings that have surfaced since I was born The road calls me to my future one that I wish I saw Beckons me to start my journey traveling into your arms. A silent road lay before me like my heart is an open song Where stars confront their desolation in the act of dying out To take a step in one direction takes me to where you are from The silence of the open heart ache cannot contort me to my fall. A silent road lay before me the journey starts when you're alone Like stars colliding for inaction our hearts beat as though they are one A silent moment in my memory as I see your tears begin to fall Capture them with my souls presence as the road ends at your door. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You have such flare to your words. You write with such emotion, and have a wonderful way of conveying your message without fancy words. A great write as always.  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
BTT.......went by to quick for everyone to see this wonderful piece. It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good work, Michael. I liked this, especially the ending. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this is very beautiful, sometimes we make hard decisions not knowing what road to go down, but here I can see it's quite evident to where she should turn in order to reclaim the right road. |
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