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Breathless Passion And So Much More
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Breathless Passion And So Much More |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Breathless Passion And So Much More Breathless we lie entangled in lovers net Caught, enthalled by this constant flame A burning desire that springs alive unbidden This passion that affects us both the same It swallows thought, consumes and compels us Calling us to wander eternally in heavens lane Contentment fills my soul with loves peace Lying in sleepy wonder I fall into your eyes Seeing reflected the flame burning yet again Once more the smouldering fires begin to rise i know that never will these flames grow cold Amazed am I at finding loves everlasting prize Laughing you allow me to succumb once more Knowing that there's no losers in this fight My heart yielded at your first tender kiss And my soul with yours has taken wing in flight Soaring to heaven to dance at angels song All this I knew, understood at our first sight Our passion is just a part of this loves delight You're in tune with my lifes' rhythm, it's beat You know my thoughts, my feelings as they appear I know that you'd be true and honest, not a cheat Our lives inter linked, like our limbs entwind I thank you beloved for making my life complete Marsha |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha! I surely hope you've presented this to the lucky individual for whom it is written...what a gift! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, not yet I haven't, but very soon I shall. I'm actually at work, on a break but at work nevertheless. So as soon as I get the opportunity, I'll give him what he richly deserves. Thanks Kari, for replying and taking the time to read it, so do you like it then? |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
oh my goodness, this is very......descriptive!!!!!!!! Emily |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A very lavishly displayed show of affection...enjoyed reading this..James |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
What a strong, beautiful and insightful description of what it's like to LOVE! Great imagery here. Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very....passionate  seriously, I enjoyed the read, nice work |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Emily, descriptive? Yes I believe it is, thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed it.  James, thank you for replying, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think this time I might have just captured a tiny piece of what I was after. Still thanks for the compliment anyway.  Azure, I'm happy that you think so, but maybe my special someone, is the one to whom the compliments should go to. When I get the chance I'll let him know that this is the place to collect his accolades. Beki, thank you, I'm glad that you took the time to read and leave a message. I do appreciated it, each reply is cherished. because I know there are so many far better poets here at Passions. Marsha Take care |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and so much more...indeed ... wonderfully sensual passionate work Marsha the first and second verse say it all so well excellent expression of pleasure and contentment found in the right chemistry. great write...great read take care jm |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Janet Marie, why thank you, that's such a lovely thing to write, and I'm glad the feelings came through. Take care Marsha |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Breathless we lie entangled in lovers net Caught, enthalled by this constant flame A burning desire that springs alive unbidden This passion that affects us both the same It swallows thought, consumes and compels us Calling us to wander eternally in heavens lane Contentment fills my soul with loves peace Lying in sleepy wonder I fall into your eyes Seeing reflected the flame burning yet again Once more the smouldering fires begin to rise i know that never will these flames grow cold Amazed am I at finding loves everlasting prize My friend, I do believe that you should be showing YOUR poems to the office as well. The passion in this one sets the screen afire in the heat of breathless gasps...whew...excellent descriptive blaze of.... well... ya know...Just plain "HOT"  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, I might have known you'd say something encouraging. I'm delighted that you think this is a 'warm' poem. My special someone tells me he likes it too, so maybe it's not too bad. As for showing the MBOOPAS this instead of what they are daily demanding, do you want your Pres lynched. Which is what I assuredly would be, if I tried to offer one of my own scribbles instead of yours. So I thank you for taking the time to comment and read this, also for your encouragement, which I value greatly. Take care Marsha |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Marsha, this is Passion and so much more. What descriptions! Just beautiful! I think the last two lines say it all: Our lives inter linked, like our limbs entwind I thank you beloved for making my life complete How lucky you both are! ~ Beth I hate quotations. Tell me what you know. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beth, I thank you sincerely, I certainly thank you for such a compliment. Personally, I give all the credit to my special someone, for if he didn't make me feel, I wouldn't be able to write it. So I thank him most of all, and yes I know that I am the lucky one. Take care Marsha |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ When you are in touch with feelings that just flow to the page ... it works ! It's the way to let it show ! I loved the easy way you let it out. Good for you ! Enjoyed muchly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marsha--what a wonder love is...you have captured the feeling of passion and serenity perfectly. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, I'm glad you enjoyed this. What can I say but thank you. You are so right the feelings just flowed, and still are, I'm happy to say. Martie, I might have known you would be so nice to me, and I do appreciate it, I really do. I thank you most particularly because it must be so difficult for you to find time to do even the everyday tasks. So to take the time which you do not have, and use it here is so thoughtful. Take care Marsha |
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