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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Barely Dawn ~*Marge Tindal*~ You breathe across my skin in soft hot whispers of barely dawn Not quite through with the night Not yet into the sleepy morn Dreams left for another time Awakening pleasures greet the dawn Wrapped up gently in your wanting As the sun creeps into my morn Sleepy smiles as you bring me into the soft, soft glow of morn Tenderly awakening moments on the beauty of this dawn ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
{{{{STRECHING}}}} mmmmm....good morning my friend....so how were your dreams?  |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, now this is a wake-up call sure to please the most ardent desires. A warm and gentle caressing, nicely done. Robert Joseph |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You've captured that moment so beautifully Can I have my coffee now? Lovely, Marge Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You breathe across my skin in soft hot whispers of barely dawn Not quite through with the night Not yet into the sleepy morn ================ Mmmmmm margie-gator .. this is sensually sweet ... better than a hot mug of me raspberry tea on this morn .... nothing like laying in bed in the morn and wakeing up slooooow .... very nice emotions in this ... and I feel lucky to hit one of yours before it has a bazzilion replies  later-snooze-alarm-gator jm |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You breathe across my skin in soft hot whispers of barely dawn Not quite through with the night Not yet into the sleepy morn Beautiful Marge Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge, You have tapped into that morning bliss with such sweet relaxing words! Deb |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Marge, Just beautiful. Now I shall retire back to bed to awaken to a dawn such as this!!! Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Mmmmmmmm ! RJ~ Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Lizzie~ Coffee ? Sure thing ! JanetMarie~ I love the idea of a bazzilion ! DarkAngel~ Glad you liked it, hon. BloomingRose~ Ahhhh ! Yes - bliss ! Bonnie~ Hello, gal ! Sooooooo good to see you. Thanks for the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
so softly, sleepily beautiful.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is excellant, soft and so beautiful. Yes this is a really great poem. As all yours are. Take care Marsha  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Now, Marge, we're going to have to have a talk, you are becoming very passionate, this certainly reveals an entire other side of you. I love it! Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it Marge..so soft and tender..where only the imagination can take over ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corazon~ Thank you for the reply. Glad you liked it. Marsha~ I just appreciate knowing you like it. Kathleen~ Now, honey-child ... I've got a passion for all facets of life .... Thanks, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ Sort of like the movies ... where they fade to imagination, huh ? Yeah ... ! Thanks for the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
What a beautiful morning poem! Thanks for sharing! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This was beautiful, loved the imagery, especially: "You breathe across my skin in soft hot whispers of barely dawn Not quite through with the night Not yet into the sleepy morn" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- passionate you are, my friend. this is so beautiful...would love to wake up to one of these wonderful dawns you write of. love and hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is so delicate, sweet and quite hot actually! this is my favorite kind of morning!  -SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Weariness in my eyes vanished as I read this. Marge I am so proud of you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beki~ Thank you for both visits. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Vicky~ Close your eyes - you must dream to the dawn. SEA~ Girl - you got it ! JD~ I certainly like your response. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, this is so lucious! If I wrote a poem about awakening in my house it would be: woke up an hour before the alarm (again) can't sleep too much worry (always) feed cat, kids, make lunches, shower, yell at kids to get ready, gone before the dawn. Thanks for showing us how it could be. Sigh... *S* Corinne |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, you have just painted a picture in my mind that would be illegal in 42 states! What a wonderful Kodak moment with you that would be |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Ahhhh ! Where there's a *sigh* there's a way ! *wink* Balladeer~ And the good news is we're in FLORIDA ! ! ! !  Nothing illegal here ! Two prints - Glossy ?  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sweetie, So nice to see my special Lady friend writing musical passion early in the morn, beautiful poetry hun. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Now that's the only way to wake up! Beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
With breath of passion filled bliss My eyes lost in the depth of your dreams Lifting my lips to yours in lovers kiss Don't wake me unless it is what it seems Thought I would roll over again....and see if you were still holding on. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
ROFL! I have a feeling a video might be in order!! ;! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Hi there, gal friend. Wonderful to see you ! Thanks for the read. Denise~ Yep ! Ya' got it ! MarkB~ Wake up, sweetie ! You romantic you ! Love ya' bunches. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Mmmmmmm ! Works for me ! *Hugs n' Stuff* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--The words you use in this are a perfect reflection of a sensuous awakening...just lovely! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW Marge what lovely thoughts Warmed me....thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Marge, this is gorgeous. So tenderly, seductively penned... Now excuse me, I think i have to go take a quick cold shower, or make a really inappropriate phone call to my honey at work . ~ Beth |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Marge, this is gorgeous. So tenderly, seductively penned... Now excuse me, I think i have to go take a quick cold shower, or make a really inappropriate phone call to my honey at work . ~ Beth I hate quotations. Tell me what you know. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it, my friend. Tracie~ Hope I can always WOW ya', gal. ElizabethCor~ Thanks for finding it so. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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