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BirdeeB
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 106
USA

0 posted 2000-10-17 01:57 AM


A candle in the wind
A flame burning so
bright then blown out
by the wind.
A gasp, a breath....
A possiblity torn away
A life ended so shortly
so briefly,so silently.
An escape from
the reality.
many Sadnesses,
many teardrops.
A lie fighting to win
past trust, past truth.
A dream shattered,
by nostalgia.
a love, a loss.
A needing
A feeling....




[This message has been edited by BirdeeB (edited 10-17-2000).]

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Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2000-10-17 05:19 AM


BirdeeB,
This is a very moving poem. There is so much feeling here, one can only stare in awe of your words.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-10-17 01:17 PM


It is a poem with feeling and the title is perfect. Good read.

Kathleen



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