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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-10-17 01:45 AM


nice

pl ea s ant

p
e
a
c
e fu l

wa y of being re pla ced

a n d theres cold betw een

th er es wor lds b etween

th e eyes of the intimate in·an·i·mate

b eyond s eeing ther e is only beli eving

so d ont be a-fraid - to be le f t this way -

on y our last c l ear day in sp ec ial
s u-bmi s s io n

l ove - l e ss/restrained e mot ion r e mains


wo rld's got a new mach ine
r uns on t ears and wasted d reams
you only thin k yo u know what you mean

come with-in
d i scover
the be auty of b e ing


dis t ant and bo t h ered

by re a lity re sistent cowards(me)

wa tch your hand turn into a fis t

a lways knew life would end like t his..



no longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-10-17 02:51 AM


a n d theres cold betw een

th er es wor lds b etween

th e eyes of the intimate in·an·i·mate

b eyond s eeing ther e is only beli eving

so d ont be a-fraid - to be le f t this way -

on y our last c l ear day in sp ec ial
s u-bmi s s io n

l ove - l e ss/restrained e mot ion r e mains

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dis t ant and bo t h ered

by re a lity re sistent cowards(me)

wa tch your hand turn into a fis t

a lways knew life would end like t his..
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hey jac ...
i see your trying some new formats and styles of poetry ...
very cool...very deep thoughts and reflections ...
and the impact of those last two s...damn
but then impact always was your gift ...
be it 4 lines or more ...
like the play on words here ...as in the title...
like your new signature too
take care poet-man
jm


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