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kevinsmommy99
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since 2000-09-23
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0 posted 2000-10-16 02:15 PM


It is so lonely
here inside my heart
missing your soul touching mine
our lives being entwined
missing the secuity and love
you gave then took away
i look around at the empty walls
that were once brightly splattered
with the intense love we shared
and i wish we could start over
but there will be no starting over
I an't turn back time
and you can't find me in your heart
the heart I once called home
now, there's no place for me
there's no love for me
visions of our wedding,
other children, all are faded
worn out, like all my hopes and dreams
this excrutiating pain,
my soul being eaten away
is so hard to bear
it's so hard to hold on
without you


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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-10-16 02:34 PM


I could feel the pain in your words..life is but a stage and im sure there will be another leading man in your life that can fill your home with the love you are missing  again..

                       ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
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2 posted 2000-10-16 05:31 PM


MOMMY99, I must tell you this made me teary-eyed...

You've penned such heart on screen and very griping I may add...

Hugs2U for sharing this poem with me2day

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-10-16 06:33 PM


Yes this can be a very painful time...when the remorse and regrets arrive and we know there is nothing we can do except feel alone...yet this will pass and time will be our friend and the day will arrive when the past is way behind us and we are living in the moment and our future is bright...happened to me...James
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-10-17 12:42 PM


KM~
Touching piece.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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