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Sweet Jasmine |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Songs of trumpeted angels in our hearts < !signature-->and allure of jasmine teases our lips the solace night unfolds its petals as we embrace with limbs of our love The opalescence of the crescent moon haunts ancient mission bells as they toll under the blanket of stars, you and I our last night together, a memory A memory of your eyes of ocean blue your voice whispers your love to me our last night of sweet jasmine, let it be trumpeted angels in our hearts, play on The moon and jasmine nights could be ours but the ancient mission bells toll adieu A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What a poem of passion, this is amazing, the entire piece had me enthralled (I really mean it!) Kathleen |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very beautiful piece from your heart, nicely done. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The moon and jasmine nights could be ours but the ancient bells toll adieu." I enjoy the imagery of this poem, the romance of the jasmine night, the stars, the moon, and the ancient mission bells all woven together into a gentle farewell...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Irish Rose..so glad you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in today..i really appreciate your nice comments..  Gemini..thank you Gemini..i try always to write from the heart. < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James..well off to fix dinner..this slimfast isnt sticking to my ribs haa... A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, one word after the other, peeling back the curtain...you give us a glance into a world of romantic bliss. A lovely read. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good morning Robert..so glad you took the time to read..you give such lovely responses. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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