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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-10-16 01:19 PM

Changes motion with an "e"
Not by timed intervals             Love is trippy
But e'er so often                Love is flowers
In sudden splinterfuls           Love don't pay off
Introspective and filleted         By the hour
How is love to be relayed
When it's hard to hold and find  Love is crazy
And then that love is blind          Love is sad
Catching up to it's scent        Love spanks bottoms
                                     When you're bad
Is the scurried capture
Of the helpless mind

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

1 posted 2000-10-16 01:38 PM

Walt... this is superb my friend -> me likes

Coco

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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-10-16 02:04 PM

Love is all of that...and so much more, good one, here.

Kathleen

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2000-10-17 12:07 PM

cocobaci cocobaci you know i still go around chanting yur name i love it so
coco baci coco baci oooo

miss rose thanky much

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-10-17 01:37 AM

Walt~
This is wonderful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2000-10-17 01:37 AM

Yuh yuh love is that and like Kathleen said soooo much more... This is terrific Walty, Great writing buddy

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 2000-10-17 07:14 AM

WOW
WOW
WOW
WOW
WOW

Ok...so THIS rocks.

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."

From Jack Maggs

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2000-10-18 07:09 AM

thank you miladys

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2000-10-26 02:59 AM

Walt-
   this is wonderful!!
   love it.

   -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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