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Still Missing You |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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The days are lonely The nights are bleak My heart is broken My spirits weak When I needed you most You've chosen to flee I call out for help No one answers me Your smile is gone With arms stiff as lead Your body lies buried You're still in my head Many months have gone by The years almost over It happened in March And now it's October I really need someplace To run and hide My world spun out of control The day they said you died. ~In Memory of Josh Erwin - Died March 21, 2000~ ... ~Still missing you, wherever you are...~ With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Broken_Winged_Angel, this is poignant piece. I especially related to Your body lies buried You're still in my head Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
A beautiful memorial. Kathleen |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Broken_winged_angel I find this poem very poignant. So much feelings, I have my arms around you. Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Nothing is as final as Death.. and no one feels it more than the ones left behind...Very Touching Dakota [This message has been edited by Dakota (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So sorry you lost someone like this. I was relating as I just lost the love of my life, but not through death, through his choice. Take care. Catalinamoon |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
BWA~ *hugs* to you. my heart goes out to you in this. this is so heartbreakingly sad...i am so sorry for your loss. i am at a loss of words when it comes to death for it is so permanent. but from a person who knows a bit about this kind of loss...here's just a little friendly advice (if that's what ya wanna call it) cherish the good times and don't let the sadness and pain make the happiness and good memories dissapear. in time you will smile again. i promise. take care till then and be strong. take care. amy  |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
To All: There's others directed towards Josh in the Corner Pub... "March Showers" and "Memories". He was a very close friend.  Kethry - Thankyou. Those two lines still ring very true for others I've lost.  Irish Rose - Thankyou.  Daniel J D - I'm returning the hug... Thankyou very much.  Dakota - That's what I was trying to say all weekend to a friend who was contemplating suicide.  Thankyou for putting it so clearly.Catalinamoon - Then I wish you luck in love in the future... and thankyou.Aimster I'm working on that.. Thankyou. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
BWA~ Sorry for your loss hon, your feelings expressed well and I felt the pain and lonliness you feel right now. *HUG* Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
hugs to you for your loss... writing can help don't you think? I am sure that all the good times and love will continue to surface with the heartache... thanks for sharing. Take care K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I'm sorry to hear about your loss, BWA. You have a *hug* from me, too. Very touching piece. sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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