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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-10-16 02:27 AM



"I Love You"

A bond as powerful as a heartbeat...........
As strong as a Hug..........

As soft as a heartfelt caress.........
As unafraid as a tear from the soul.......

Growing stronger every day.......

A bond able to make two become one.......
A bond that can never be broken...........

Three simple words that stop time..........

Three simple words that are both an enigma...........
Wrapped in a riddle.......

Yet more clear than crystal..........

"I Love You"........Say it with all your being

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-10-16 07:58 AM


Lovely sentiments in this piece Eyes! Three simple words, yet they hold so much depth and meaning ... beautifully expressed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sven
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2 posted 2000-10-16 06:21 PM


the expression here is wonderful. . .

well done. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


catalinamoon
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3 posted 2000-10-16 11:00 PM


Beautiful and so true. And so hard when the words are not returned.
Catalinamoon

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