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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-10-16 12:53 PM


thought full of

empty daze even lonelier nights
can't change things happening should
you ever wonder if I'm lost & how endured
separations bruising cost I missed you
the gentleness and touch wonder
what it is you miss in all my
weighing such I find
some times in
making
and
others
too how I
am just a friend

of mine and I’m tired it’s
true thought about looking
forward to if coercion
should persist
to leave
once

more again.

would
you
?

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Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
~Marge Tindal~





[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-16-2000).]

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Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
1 posted 2000-10-16 12:55 PM


Dale - she'd be a fool to let you go
Well done mate - I've had these feelings too

lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
2 posted 2000-10-16 01:02 AM


Hi Bill,

You know she'd never leave me. It was a past life I thought I remembered. Besides I'd never let her get away that easy. We're very secure Bill, thank God. It was just a writing I found on a fruit jar label at King Soopers grocery... Check aisle 14... they got some good stuff called food for thought. LOL

dale

< !signature-->

Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
~Marge Tindal~




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-16-2000).]

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